{"type":"rich","version":"1.0","provider_name":"Transistor","provider_url":"https://transistor.fm","author_name":"Third Person POV: A Writing Group","title":"Writing Tools and Brutally Useful Feedback — Ep. 13 Third Person POV: A Writing Group","html":"<iframe width=\"100%\" height=\"180\" frameborder=\"no\" scrolling=\"no\" seamless src=\"https://share.transistor.fm/e/5783d41f\"></iframe>","width":"100%","height":180,"duration":6836,"description":"In this episode, we talk through the writing tools we use, how we give feedback, and how much structure actually helps when drafting a novel. Along the way, we critique chapters dealing with action scenes, character motivation, pacing, consequences, and the problem of a protagonist who may be too reactive.Find the co-hosts on:→JC Bybee at https://jcbybee.com/→Grey Alder at https://greyalderbooks.com/→Tyler Hess on his blog: https://hesstylerblog.com/","thumbnail_url":"https://img.transistorcdn.com/AJCsL6_8ZpjcHiBj5Urw2UFJi6DvvGi6z7az7REJLA4/rs:fill:0:0:1/w:400/h:400/q:60/mb:500000/aHR0cHM6Ly9pbWct/dXBsb2FkLXByb2R1/Y3Rpb24udHJhbnNp/c3Rvci5mbS8wMTQ2/MTZlOTRmMDI0NTQ0/ZWRkOWMyZTA5MDAy/MDhiZS5wbmc.webp","thumbnail_width":300,"thumbnail_height":300}