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Stu:
Are you telling me if you watch Xena, you, uh...

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Mel:
If you have an unbreakable television date with Xena, I'm sorry to tell you, you're queer.

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Stu:
Hi, I'm Stu Willis.

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Chas:
And I'm Chas Fisher.

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Mel:
And I'm Mel Killingsworth.

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Stu:
And welcome to Drive Zero, a podcast where three emerging-ish filmmakers-ish

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try to work out what makes great screenplays work.

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And today we are continuing with our series that we've done about different

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ways that the filmmakers or storytellers can talk directly to the audience.

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And this one is on breaking the fourth wall, or for people who may have been

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confused by some of our other terminology in previous episodes,

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barreling, which is to refer to looking straight down the barrel of the camera.

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And we're predominantly referring to when

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characters basically look at

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the camera and by extension are looking at us as the audience and how we're

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hoping to distinguish that from in the previous episodes we looked at like a

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taxonomy of different ways that storytellers can talk directly to the audience

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but I feel like this one's going to be the biggest contrast to voiceover.

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I mean, that's for me at least.

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Why would you choose voiceover or to break the fourth wall?

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Because you're doing a video on YouTube and you want to make sure that you don't

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get copyright struck, so you put your face there instead of pausing on the video

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and talking over it, as I've been learning from recent experience.

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And some do both, which is a lot of fun, but some choose one or the other and

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some vary back and forth.

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Chas:
Just jumping in quick to note that this episode, as all our episodes are,

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If you want more Draft Zero more often, check out the Patreon link in our show notes.

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And one thing that you'll find there for free is our response to this question

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by top tier patron Alexandra, which as you'll hear, strongly relates to this episode.

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Mel:
Hi Chas, hi Stu, hi Mel. I've been very much enjoying your deep dive into all

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the various facets of talking directly to the audience.

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And it's got me pondering, namely, I wonder if direct address and voiceover

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aren't distinctly separate mechanisms, but lie more on a continuum.

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For example, the address to the reader-slash-audience is an old literary trope

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that stretches back to the invention of the modern novel in the 18th century.

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Lawrence Stern's Tristam Shandy from 1759 is a celebrated example.

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And of course, addressing the audience directly in the theatre dates way further

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back to Aristophanes in ancient Athens.

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All of which is to say that the so-called neutral third-person narrator,

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be it in a novel, theatre, or film, and who doesn't directly

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address the audience is actually more the exception rather than

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the norm and it's quite a recent norm at

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that so one of the things that's notable about a

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fleabag or ferris bueller's day off or wayne's world especially funny games

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is that the character addressing the audience knows not only that they're in

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a work of fiction but more specifically that they're in a film or a tv show

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which is an even more direct form of address than the more literary narrator

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like in Barry Lyndon or True Grit,

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who's using that sort of 19th century dear reader mechanism rather than a dear film viewer mechanism.

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All of which suggests a further question. Is the viewer being addressed a communal

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one, as in all you viewers at home, or is it a specific one,

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as in you Chaz, or you Stu, or you Mel, the individual?

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So what's so chillingly effective about the direct address in Funny Games is

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that the viewer can't hide in the crowd and the cinema audience,

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but is accused individually of being complicit in the violence portrayed on

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screen, which is, it seems, rather rare in either film or literature.

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Chas:
If you want to hear our answer to that amazing question, please go to our Patreon link in the show notes.

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Chas:
All right, Patreon plug over, back to the topic at hand.

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Stu:
So Mel, what have we chosen?

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Yes.

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Mel:
So we've got the pilot episode of High Fidelity, the TV show.

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And then we've got a season two episode of Abbott Elementary.

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And then we've got an episode from Fleabag, also season two, episode four.

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And so the High Fidelity, essentially, because it's the pilot,

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it's setting up how it does its fourth wall break conceit is sort of establishing the rules.

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Abbott Elementary is playing with the rules that it's already established.

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And it's, you know, maybe 30 episodes before this.

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And Fleabag is actually smashing all of its rules that it's established up into this point.

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Yeah. It is interesting to me that we picked three TV examples,

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although it is well worth listeners going back to the previous episode on which

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I did not appear on how this technique was used in Fight Club.

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For specific scenes. And it'll be interesting for us to unpack the idea of why

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TV particularly has done it.

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And if you haven't seen Abbott Elementary, documentary, I think because it's

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so episodic, you'll get a lot out of this discussion anyway,

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and equally true of High Fidelity, because we're talking about the pilot.

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They're all worth watching, but I think you can listen to this episode and yeah,

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you might get mild spoilers, but I don't think it's going to emotionally spoil you.

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And in terms of Abbott, Abbott is very close to something like Parks and Recreation

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and The Office and a lot of these mockumentary, long-running TV sitcoms.

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The biggest difference is that Abbott does play with it a little bit more,

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and that's particularly the episodes we picked up on.

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It's a bit more meta.

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So before we dive in particular, my big learning that I'm carrying over from

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our episode on Fight Club, which actually was prompted by Mel and then I kind

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of summarized it and took credit for it, as I do.

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Which is that what's interesting about barreling the camera,

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unlike voiceover, is it tends to imply that the character has a degree of the

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control of how the story is being told. hold.

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And so I think all these three shows explore that spectrum of the control of

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the character in terms of how they present the information.

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And as I kind of then talked about, that control of the story is a bit of a

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resource to use a kind of technical term, but it's something that a character

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can choose to use as part of their tactics of getting what they want from the audience.

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And so that control kind of informs that. And what's really interesting is Avid

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Elementary, as we will talk about, is a mockumentary.

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So there's a diegetic reason for them to be talking at the camera,

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but it also affects the degree of control that they have.

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That's kind of my key learning that I'm going to bring in. And one of the questions

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I'm going to be asking is like, are they in control of the narrative?

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How much control do they have of the narrative and how that then connects to

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what they want from the audience?

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And I would also add kind of separately what the effect is, I guess,

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for lack of a better word, the narrative effect.

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So what does the character who is talking directly to us want?

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What are they achieving differently by breaking the fourth wall as opposed to

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voiceover or just you know acting respecting the

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fourth wall and then as against what is

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the effect on us of this technique and it's interesting so in our in our previous

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episodes on you know how filmmakers can talk more directly interact more directly

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with the audience we identified a number of levers and none of them are really

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it's not that they're not relevant they've all just been pulled very

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firmly in one direction when you break the fourth wall.

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So, the levers we talked about in relation to voiceover were,

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is it diegetic or non-diegetic?

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And that one will still apply here because we've got in-world breaking the fourth

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wall or in-world talking to an audience versus, I guess, it's still in the world,

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but I guess we'll talk about that.

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That's still an important lever that can be pulled.

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We had a different lever of a spectrum of who is talking from From an omniscient unidentified...

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Narrator or you know title cards from the filmmakers themselves right the way

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through to a character and whenever you got breaking the fourth wall it's always a character in.

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The examples that we have chosen because there are examples which we have done

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including f is for fake and sans soleil but also examples like annie hall which

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is woody allen where it's like an actor writer and it's kind of them breaking

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character breaking character fleabag doesn't break character I mean,

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maybe Woody Allen doesn't really play a character in Annie Hall,

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but he certainly brings in, there's that great scene where he brings in the

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film critic, you know, to talk to the character and stuff like that.

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So he's definitely playing himself.

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I mean, that's the interesting question, actually, now that I've raised it. I've gone, yeah.

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To what extent is Fleabag riffing on, how much is it riffing on Phoebe Waller-Bridge's

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personality and her life experience, and how much is that informing the text in a way?

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Because I do think that is, it is seemingly a technique used by,

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you know, writer actors or people that are kind of positioning themselves as

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that. And I'm sure there are other examples as well.

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Well, in Fleabag in particular, it came out of a theater show,

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a one woman theater show, where the entire time she's essentially speaking directly

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to the audience only without, you know, a camera in between her and them.

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So I think that it really sort of makes a direct line from one to the other.

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Obviously, not all theater shows that go on to be TV shows do that,

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but it is a very sort of, I'm going to sit and tell you a story if you've seen

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the theater show, which I have.

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And then obviously she's not doing that in Fleabag, but she's still taking bits

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of that from the theater show.

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Yeah. So, all right. So, who is talking is still a relevant lever.

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And we know that it is a character in the three examples that we picked,

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but you're right, Stuart.

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It's not, you can break the fourth wall without necessarily it always being a character.

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And I think we'll see that to a smaller extent in Abadie Elementary, but I'll get to that.

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Whom are they talking to? And this is when I'm like, well, they're always talking to the audience.

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And then yet in this very three examples, we've got, I think,

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three subtle variations on whom the characters are talking to.

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I mean, I think who does the audience represent is actually the interesting

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question. Is it the audience of a film show?

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Is it the audience in their mind? Who is this audience?

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Yeah. From when in time is the communication coming?

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Now that is firmly locked because we're seeing the character talk although it

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could be interesting i'd none of the examples that we're looking at do this

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but it could be interesting if a character were to break the fourth wall and

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leave the narrative time wise that they might know more about the story that.

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Happens in high fidelity there is a moment in high fidelity where there's a

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flashback and there's a piece to camera there's also uh not in these examples

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but in fight club one of the fourth fourth wall break is in a flashback where

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you kind of actually go jack the edward norton character is not present in the scene but he's.

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Physically standing.

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There like a tv presenter and.

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Talking about.

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It as if he is so i do think it's something that you can use.

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And what does the communication want from the audience and we've already discussed

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that it might be the character talking to us as the audience might want something

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and separately the filmmakers might want something else so So,

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actually, these levers still are relevant,

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hazzah, and possibly applying them to the three examples will bring value.

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So, shall we jump into High Fidelity?

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I ran into my ex last night. So, how was it, you know, seeing him?

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You know that scene at the end of Braveheart where they rip all his entrails

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out and he's like freedom, but it's like a positive thing, you know,

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because he like inspired his people or whatever?

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Yeah. Like that, but without the silver lining.

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Pretentious location, owner's a little rude, two and a half stars.

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You guys have a bathroom?

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If I let you go, I gotta let everybody else go to the bathroom,

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and I can't do that. But I'm the only one here.

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I'm just too adored to have it come to pass You know that you do this after

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every relationship? Do what? No offense, but you tend to overthink things a little.

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Your ex went back to New York. It's cool he's back in town. We were both so

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whatever about that lily girl.

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What lily girl? I think I tend to think about things the exact right amount. Thank you.

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It's not the most straightforward of the examples, but at least it's one single

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character and whom they are talking to does not change.

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Yeah. And High Fidelity opens on Rob breaking the fourth wall.

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Like it opens very quickly into Rob talking to us. And then it interrupts it

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as Mac finishes breaking up with Rob.

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I think it's best if I do, sir. Just stay for tonight. No.

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Okay, just stay for a drink then. I don't think a drink's gonna do it, Rob.

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How about two drinks? Jesus Christ, can we just make this just a little bit

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easy, please? Oh, I'm sorry, is this inconvenient for you?

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And then Rob, like, returns to break the fourth wall to finish explaining.

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I see you.

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I see you.

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Congratulations,

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you've made it to the top five mac number five with a bullet.

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Welcome and mac is unaware of to whom rob is talking so it sets those two things

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up very quickly rob is breaking the fourth wall talking to us and other people

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within the world seem unaware that this is happening.

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And it's very much...

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Not explained within the film what rob is

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doing it feels almost though like an internal monologue the

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way that rob is talking how things are phrased talking about

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her process the way that she likes to list things both in

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her quote-unquote normal life and as well as that carries over quite readily

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if you've seen the movie then the first two maybe three episodes of the tv series

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basically cover the same sort of ground and a lot of very similar things and

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then it sort of breaks away but if If you've seen the movie, it's quite similar.

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Should we actually summarize the series rather than just diving straight into a scene?

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Mel:
It's how it opens.

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It is how it opens. Absolutely. And I'm going to be like, you may be wondering

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how we got here. And then I'm going to explain the context for it.

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Mel:
Really?

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Which is, it's based on a 1995 novel by Nick Hornby.

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And what's interesting is I do think the novel has that kind of like quasi,

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maybe semi-autobiographical quality, which is

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kind of why the internal narration kind of has that feeling and it's

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basically about a character rob uh who

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owns a record store and it's her kind of revisiting her past relationships right

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and the kind of the connection of her relationships between music and

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popular culture that's kind of the overall show right it's

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not quote-unquote plot heavy the first episode she

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starts with this breakup as you just talked about with mac

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right then it kind of goes to explain her her breakup with simon who

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turns out he realized this is he's a gay man and

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he starts working at her record shot she has a

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date with the character that took me a long time to realize

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was from white lotus because he's less of

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a jerk so he this character is clive they go on a date at the beginning she

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thinks he's ghosted him and then he kind of comes back at the end and turns

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out he's actually kind of a nice guy and then so you get these senses like she's

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like oh maybe i can explore this and then she runs into her ex mac and then

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we set up what i presume i've only watched the The first episode is going to be the conflict,

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the central conflict of at least a few episodes, which is her trying to decide

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between getting back together with Mac, her ex, or exploring a relationship with Clyde.

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Mel:
As an aside, it's very funny to me that you think that Jake Lacey is an asshole

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because in every other thing he plays, he's the nicest person,

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like lots of rom-coms, really lovely guy.

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And so White Lotus was casting very much against type because I'd seen him in

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a bunch of rom-coms and a bunch of other things. So it's pretty great.

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He was in Girls as well, wasn't he?

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I forgot that he was in Girls. Yeah.

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What I would say as well is the framework of the book, the movie,

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and this pilot, and as well as throughout the episode, and Mel,

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you've already mentioned it, is Rob likes to make lists.

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It's also, everything is kind of tied to music.

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Rob owns a record store, the characters work in a record store,

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they're often making playlists or mixtapes or writing lists of whatever they're

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going through at the time and linking it back to music.

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And the list for this episode was her top five breakups.

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And for me, the reason why I'm going to state it up front is that all the different

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iterations of this story is about Rob trying to overcome their very internal barriers.

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So, in this version, the TV version, Rob states that the breakup with Mac was

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so painful that she will never swim in deep waters again.

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Truth is, I've been completely out of my depth.

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And after that, I was determined to never get out of my depth again.

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So, for the last year, I've basically just been,

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Paddling around in the shallow end.

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So she's deliberately made herself emotionally unavailable for fear of being hurt.

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And importantly, she actually, in her list, she flashes back to her as a young

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kid and the breakup that she had when she was like nine years old.

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Private is like, you're meant to be like, you're not, you're still not over that.

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Your relationship that lasted six hours. and importantly the kid at the very

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end the button of that flashback is the kid looking at the camera and saying what also.

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Very importantly which i think is funny because the voiceover essentially of

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the flashback is coming from the present and she's telling us that the reason

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she remembers the specific time of their date is because she had an unbreakable

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date with xena airing so she's She's also very clearly telling us that she's bisexual,

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which comes up more clearly in a couple of episodes, but she absolutely is.

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Are you telling me if you watch Xena, you...

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If you have an unbreakable television date with Xena, I'm sorry to tell you, you're queer.

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I don't know how it manifests exactly, but that's just a fact. Science.

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But wasn't breakup number three with Kat?

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Comes up soon, yes.

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So, the main reason why I'm talking about that, and I actually love,

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Sue, that you brought up the kid, because it shows the rules in which they're

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breaking the fourth wall.

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Because when in flashback, that's the only flashback where Rob is not playing herself.

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But from memory, Rob doesn't break the fourth wall in any of the flashbacks

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except that one. When they're in the flashbacks, they're generally in voiceover,

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her relaying what has happened.

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And the point I'm making here is, for the most part, it feels like that breaking

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the fourth wall is coming from the narrative present.

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But the kid...

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Breaks the fourth wall separately and.

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That's the the joke yeah right i think is

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the kid as you say it's kind of her internal narrative and

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i think that's important to compare to uh fleabags at least in the fleabag episode

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we re-watched for this the flashback that's at that does not have fleabag looking

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at the camera at all right it's completely with there is no fourth wall break

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right which i think is kind of connects to the idea of what fleabag is doing

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so i think what you talked about,

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what are the rules around the fourth wall breaking is something that you can ask themselves,

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what is breaking the fourth wall meant to be representing or who is the audience representing?

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And I do think, I'm going to dive into it now, even though we're still just

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on high fidelity, there is a difference between how they shoot the talking to

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the camera and the barrelling in high fidelity and in fleabag.

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In fleabag, the camera is often at her side and she's glancing over her shoulder

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behind or glancing to the side, et cetera, et cetera.

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In High Fidelity, it's largely kind of shot front on,

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like broadly speaking, it's not meant to be like quick asides,

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because I think the big difference between High Fidelity and Fleabag in terms

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of their intentionality around the talking to camera is that Fleabag has effectively

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got like intrusive thoughts.

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She's speaking just her mind in the moment, right? In High Fidelity,

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it's Rob kind of trying to understand her story.

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And so she's kind of telling the story as a bit of a process.

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She is thinking with her mouth open, right?

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It's kind of like how she would do it to a therapist, I guess.

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Chas:
Yeah, absolutely. And the one thing, the reason why I bang on about it a bit

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is they have picked a point in time when the fourth wall breaks open.

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Are coming from. They are immediate, right? When Rob breaks the fourth wall,

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she's very much in the moment that we are seeing narratively as well.

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So, you're talking about that very opening one, she is crying.

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She's in the middle of a breakup and she's listing her breakups.

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She finishes the breakup with Mac and then says, all right, the list has changed.

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Well done Mac, you've made it to number one, right? You've made my top five

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breakups. It's in that instant.

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And that's why I'm kind of banging on about the flashbacks a little bit,

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because I think it would be very different if, you know, like Woody Allen in

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Annie Hall, those breaking the fourth walls,

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who Woody Allen is when he's breaking the fourth wall is not necessarily the

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character he is in that very instant.

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Whereas in both High Fidelity and all three of the examples and in Fleabag and

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in Abbott Elementary, whenever a character is talking directly to camera or

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looking at camera, they are in that narrative moment.

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Mel:
Their present tense, I guess. Yeah.

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Chas:
And the immediacy of it is, I think, the big difference I've taken out of this from voiceover.

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Yeah. And I think High Fidelity in particular uses voiceover in those flashbacks,

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right and so then it will kind of have her in the

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moment and i think we're kind of assuming that the voiceover is it

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starting with a piece to camera we go to the flashback we now

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hearing the voiceover we're still assuming it's coming from that

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singular moment in the present tense it's not coming from her

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from episode eight right yeah it's coming from this specific scene so the piece

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to camera helps us understand from when in time the voiceover is coming right

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and it does give them the option i haven't watched the whole show yet and i

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think i probably will now but it wouldn't surprise me if If there is just another

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piece to camera or two in future flashbacks, it wouldn't surprise me.

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Like, it doesn't feel completely unchararistic, right? Because,

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I mean, they've set up that contrivance right in that first flashback to her as a child.

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But I imagine even if there was a breaking the fourth wall in a flashback-

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It would be Rob from the narrative present, not Rob from the,

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in the time of the flashback.

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I don't know. I haven't seen the whole show, so I can't speculate other than

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what I say, what I've seen, which is that she does it as a child, right?

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Yeah. Because it's the child using adult language. It does feel like this is

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her from the present putting words into the mouth of her as a kid, as a teenager. Yeah.

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Mel:
There's one other moment, which I do think if we're talking about the levers

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that it pulls, that is, it's kind of a clever bit.

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I don't think it has a huge meaning to it, but there's a use of the diegetic

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music, which sounds like a soundtrack, because obviously there's a lot of music

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that's played on records and played within the show. But then there's also a soundtrack.

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And then there's a moment where Rob sees Mac and there's a song playing and

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then she takes her headphones out and suddenly the music gets quite tinny.

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Mac.

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What are you doing here?

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So it's almost that we are within her headspace

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there and um it's this diegetic non-diegetic music

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it's the filmmakers playing with what we're

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hearing and then she's hearing as well and that because that is our point of

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view character and the only one who breaks the fourth wall which i just thought

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was a bit of fun and it's something that shows do even if there are no fourth

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wall breaks but it feels like an extra little punchy bit of you know if we're

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hearing her constant and she's constantly talking to us,

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it's like, oh, we're with her in that as well.

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And then she sees Robin takes them out and it's breaking that moment as she starts talking to Mac.

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Chas:
Yeah.

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Stu:
So to come to my...

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Controlling question um literally about

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control how much control do we think rob has over the

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telling of this story and what do you think is

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the emotional effect of that i think she's got quite a lot of control in fact

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i think and and we'll get to it when we finally get to fleabag i actually think

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she's possibly got more control over the telling of the story than fleabag does

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because of what it's trying to represent about her psychology yep right we.

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Mel:
See everyone from All the flashbacks, like, do we really know that Kat was that much of a dick?

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Mel:
Maybe Kat was, maybe Kat wasn't. But either way, the only knowledge that we

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have about that breakup and all of the things that led to it is from Rob,

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not just Rob's point of view, but Rob directly telling us this is what happened.

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And so she has essentially all of the control.

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Chas:
She prompts every flashback. They're not prompted by an omniscient storyteller.

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The flashbacks aren't happening to her. She is taking us to the flashbacks.

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Mel:
Look at this number in my list. Now I will show it to you. And she's picking

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Mel:
which ones we see and don't see as well.

395
00:26:32,250 --> 00:26:34,770
Mel:
She's picking the moments in time that she shows us.

396
00:26:35,230 --> 00:26:40,830
Mel:
So it's all to present herself in a certain way or her experiences in her way.

397
00:26:41,290 --> 00:26:44,630
Chas:
Referring back Mel to the moment that you picked up where she takes the headphones

398
00:26:44,630 --> 00:26:48,910
Chas:
off and the score becomes diegetic when she bumps into Mac.

399
00:26:49,090 --> 00:26:54,930
Chas:
She is deliberately told that moment out of time because we see her go on the

400
00:26:54,930 --> 00:26:59,050
Chas:
date with Clyde and all of that's playing out and she's hurt her hand.

401
00:26:59,210 --> 00:27:03,370
Chas:
And then we see why she was in such a mood at that point.

402
00:27:03,450 --> 00:27:08,410
Chas:
She's told us that she only bumped into Mac shortly before going on the date

403
00:27:08,410 --> 00:27:11,470
Chas:
with Clyde, and she tells us that later.

404
00:27:12,250 --> 00:27:16,510
Mel:
It supports her story and supports her telling us these things. Yeah, absolutely.

405
00:27:16,930 --> 00:27:20,030
Stu:
So I'm going to draw an interesting distinction here because I think you're right.

406
00:27:20,170 --> 00:27:24,750
Stu:
I think she is in control of the telling of the narrative, but I don't think

407
00:27:24,750 --> 00:27:29,690
Stu:
she is really that in control of the filmmaking per se, right?

408
00:27:29,830 --> 00:27:33,170
Stu:
I don't think she's going to do the Fight Club moment where it's like,

409
00:27:33,290 --> 00:27:36,490
Stu:
hold up, rewind, and you kind of have that kind of metatextual stuff.

410
00:27:36,610 --> 00:27:37,650
Stu:
This is my impression, right?

411
00:27:37,790 --> 00:27:41,910
Stu:
That she's in control in the telling of the narrative, and the part of the kind of like-

412
00:27:42,420 --> 00:27:45,600
Stu:
more unadorned style and part of that more presentational

413
00:27:45,600 --> 00:27:48,360
Stu:
style where the camera's just sitting there and she's looking at more

414
00:27:48,360 --> 00:27:51,120
Stu:
directly on is to indicate the fact

415
00:27:51,120 --> 00:27:54,880
Stu:
that she's just telling the story that the camera

416
00:27:54,880 --> 00:27:57,780
Stu:
isn't something that she has control over she

417
00:27:57,780 --> 00:28:01,040
Stu:
doesn't have control of the camera and the editing or the sound

418
00:28:01,040 --> 00:28:03,740
Stu:
or any of that stuff her control is limiting to the

419
00:28:03,740 --> 00:28:07,840
Stu:
presentation of the information to the audience it's a subtle thing but there

420
00:28:07,840 --> 00:28:11,780
Stu:
is like like a Deadpool could have been a film that we did for this and Deadpool

421
00:28:11,780 --> 00:28:17,080
Stu:
clearly has control over the kind of filmmaking like the metatextual like the

422
00:28:17,080 --> 00:28:20,680
Stu:
textual elements of the story I mean he certainly had in the comics right and

423
00:28:20,680 --> 00:28:23,240
Stu:
they translated that to the the film so.

424
00:28:23,240 --> 00:28:27,400
Mel:
If you put Deadpool at like a 10 and Fight Club at maybe like a 9 or a 10 would

425
00:28:27,400 --> 00:28:29,680
Mel:
you put High Fidelity maybe like a 7 oh.

426
00:28:29,680 --> 00:28:30,900
Stu:
In terms of control like.

427
00:28:30,900 --> 00:28:34,700
Mel:
Where you know loosely in terms of the levers right that In terms of control.

428
00:28:34,840 --> 00:28:36,520
Mel:
Specific lever in terms of control.

429
00:28:36,840 --> 00:28:39,860
Mel:
Yeah. I think that's a very fair distinction, a good distinction.

430
00:28:40,120 --> 00:28:44,100
Stu:
I think it's useful because I think you'll see there's like a flip side to that

431
00:28:44,100 --> 00:28:48,220
Stu:
in kind of like the inverse to that in Abbott Elementary.

432
00:28:48,620 --> 00:28:52,280
Stu:
And I think it's kind of interesting because Fleabag kind of plays with that,

433
00:28:52,340 --> 00:28:53,820
Stu:
which we've already talked a little bit about in Fight Club,

434
00:28:53,900 --> 00:28:55,560
Stu:
but we'll unpack that a little bit more.

435
00:28:56,060 --> 00:29:00,280
Chas:
But I think, Stu, your question about whom are they talking to?

436
00:29:00,280 --> 00:29:04,080
Chas:
Like, who does the audience, us as the viewer being eyeballed and spoken to

437
00:29:04,080 --> 00:29:05,580
Chas:
by Rob, who do we represent?

438
00:29:05,780 --> 00:29:11,340
Chas:
Because if we represented the audience of the TV show High Fidelity,

439
00:29:11,600 --> 00:29:16,140
Chas:
then she would have the control over those things because she knows she's in a TV show.

440
00:29:16,400 --> 00:29:22,480
Chas:
I think because she is not controlling those things, it changes who we are as her audience.

441
00:29:22,820 --> 00:29:23,480
Stu:
Yeah, I agree.

442
00:29:23,480 --> 00:29:29,420
Chas:
It makes us just an individual person being told her story and she is in control

443
00:29:29,420 --> 00:29:37,620
Chas:
of her story and in what order she wants to present it, but she's not aware that she's in a TV show.

444
00:29:37,800 --> 00:29:39,260
Stu:
Yeah, I think she's the internal...

445
00:29:39,970 --> 00:29:43,290
Stu:
Narrator i have a very strong internal narrator

446
00:29:43,290 --> 00:29:46,090
Stu:
very visual i can completely disappear emma notes

447
00:29:46,090 --> 00:29:48,910
Stu:
it she'll be like where are you and i will have to moment

448
00:29:48,910 --> 00:29:54,890
Stu:
because i my mind i is so vivid that i do not actually recall what i'm saying

449
00:29:54,890 --> 00:29:58,450
Stu:
like sometimes it's why i nearly walk into things and stuff like that right

450
00:29:58,450 --> 00:30:03,250
Stu:
and so she to me in high fidelity is absolutely representing that moment of

451
00:30:03,250 --> 00:30:08,230
Stu:
kind of like drifting off and completely narrating something and the way that that bend bounces to,

452
00:30:08,950 --> 00:30:11,770
Stu:
flashbacks etc etc right or you know

453
00:30:11,770 --> 00:30:14,850
Stu:
and and that's often why some of those kind of pieces to camera lead into

454
00:30:14,850 --> 00:30:17,590
Stu:
little moments of flashback right not always but it

455
00:30:17,590 --> 00:30:20,270
Stu:
does seem they set up a little bit of a you know the

456
00:30:20,270 --> 00:30:24,630
Stu:
flashback may be very small or it might be you know like we're going to go and

457
00:30:24,630 --> 00:30:28,910
Stu:
summarize her relationship with whoever but it does feel like that is what it's

458
00:30:28,910 --> 00:30:33,530
Stu:
kind of do and we are the we're inside her mind it's kind of like a a herman's

459
00:30:33,530 --> 00:30:38,470
Stu:
head or an inside out without having those characters cutting into that, right?

460
00:30:38,650 --> 00:30:46,010
Chas:
Well, there is definitely a different relationship between Rob and us and Rob

461
00:30:46,010 --> 00:30:47,350
Chas:
and every other character.

462
00:30:47,590 --> 00:30:54,270
Chas:
You know, similarly to what we identified in Veronica Mars, Veronica in the

463
00:30:54,270 --> 00:30:58,070
Chas:
voiceover episode, Veronica shares in voiceover things that she would never

464
00:30:58,070 --> 00:31:00,370
Chas:
share with other characters in world.

465
00:31:00,510 --> 00:31:03,390
Chas:
And Rob here in High Fidelity is doing the

466
00:31:03,390 --> 00:31:06,150
Chas:
same thing and it seems so

467
00:31:06,150 --> 00:31:09,150
Chas:
obvious to say it's dramatizing the internal but it's

468
00:31:09,150 --> 00:31:13,410
Chas:
doing so in a way that I think I'm trying to imagine what this story would look

469
00:31:13,410 --> 00:31:16,810
Chas:
like without the breaking the fourth wall and I still think it would be great

470
00:31:16,810 --> 00:31:22,450
Chas:
and I still think it would be interesting but we would not get the access to

471
00:31:22,450 --> 00:31:26,430
Chas:
Rob's internal journey in anywhere near the same

472
00:31:26,510 --> 00:31:32,650
Chas:
way because of this narration and how she's sharing her emotional present and

473
00:31:32,650 --> 00:31:34,250
Chas:
her internal narration with us.

474
00:31:34,470 --> 00:31:37,210
Stu:
Or the nature of her kind of relationship dysfunction.

475
00:31:38,110 --> 00:31:43,790
Chas:
Well, that's, yeah, that's bang on because the best bit of setup that this does

476
00:31:43,790 --> 00:31:44,890
Chas:
from a craft perspective.

477
00:31:45,010 --> 00:31:49,170
Chas:
So, we've got, Mel, you've already talked about, you know, it opens with her

478
00:31:49,170 --> 00:31:53,210
Chas:
breaking the fourth wall in an emotional present and we've got the breakup. up.

479
00:31:53,430 --> 00:31:59,550
Chas:
It then cuts to a year later and she has a call with her brother and she lies

480
00:31:59,550 --> 00:32:01,990
Chas:
to her brother about going on a date.

481
00:32:02,230 --> 00:32:06,070
Chas:
And then she talks to us telling us, I could go on a date.

482
00:32:07,210 --> 00:32:11,650
Chas:
And then it immediately cuts. And we now know later at the end of the episode

483
00:32:11,650 --> 00:32:15,650
Chas:
that she's actually deliberately not told us what happens in the intervening

484
00:32:15,650 --> 00:32:18,410
Chas:
time, which is she bumps into Mac on the street.

485
00:32:18,950 --> 00:32:23,130
Chas:
But from us as the audience, it immediately cuts to her going on a date and

486
00:32:23,130 --> 00:32:25,470
Chas:
talking to us saying, I'm not ready.

487
00:32:28,970 --> 00:32:32,670
Excerpts:
I could have a date if I wanted to.

488
00:32:47,850 --> 00:32:48,350
Excerpts:
Because I'm fine.

489
00:32:51,190 --> 00:32:52,110
Excerpts:
I'm totally fine.

490
00:32:56,170 --> 00:32:58,590
Excerpts:
I'm not fine. I'm not ready. This is fucked.

491
00:32:59,530 --> 00:33:04,590
Chas:
So it's so in the emotional present that like it's going back to what you guys

492
00:33:04,590 --> 00:33:10,530
Chas:
identified in Fight Club is it's teaching us how reliable Rob is as a narrator.

493
00:33:10,750 --> 00:33:14,930
Chas:
And what you guys have talked about in other episodes is how much it's demonstrating

494
00:33:14,930 --> 00:33:18,690
Chas:
to us how much Rob is lying to herself. self. She's not lying to us.

495
00:33:19,030 --> 00:33:23,210
Chas:
She's not saying I'm okay to go on a date because she wants to mislead us.

496
00:33:23,310 --> 00:33:26,830
Chas:
She's lying to herself that I'm okay to go on a date. And then she realizes.

497
00:33:27,150 --> 00:33:33,690
Mel:
Oh, oops. Yeah. But I think when we talk about what is the effect on the audience,

498
00:33:33,830 --> 00:33:38,930
Mel:
I think that is really a good segue because we've all been there.

499
00:33:38,990 --> 00:33:40,990
Mel:
We've all thought that we, oh yeah.

500
00:33:41,090 --> 00:33:44,210
Mel:
And it's not just that that we're telling our friends this, or just telling

501
00:33:44,210 --> 00:33:47,790
Mel:
someone this. We really think that, okay, sure. And then later we go,

502
00:33:47,850 --> 00:33:49,070
Mel:
oh, I was lying to myself.

503
00:33:49,550 --> 00:33:52,230
Mel:
Obviously, sometimes when we lie to ourselves, it's to make we know.

504
00:33:52,410 --> 00:33:58,150
Mel:
But sometimes we look back and go, no, I was definitely attempting to convince

505
00:33:58,150 --> 00:34:01,270
Mel:
myself by just saying I was fine and not actually being fine.

506
00:34:01,450 --> 00:34:06,990
Mel:
So I think the identification is twofold. We do identify with Rob because we

507
00:34:06,990 --> 00:34:11,710
Mel:
do these things, especially those of us who have like a running internal monologue and or love lists.

508
00:34:12,130 --> 00:34:15,950
Mel:
But also it really does help us empathize with her.

509
00:34:16,010 --> 00:34:20,730
Mel:
The fact that it's putting us in her point of view so much, including when her

510
00:34:20,730 --> 00:34:22,250
Mel:
point of view is in fact mistaken.

511
00:34:22,470 --> 00:34:25,730
Chas:
Yeah. And following straight on from that scene, she says she's not ready for

512
00:34:25,730 --> 00:34:28,490
Chas:
the date. The date is not going well.

513
00:34:28,830 --> 00:34:32,250
Chas:
And she tries to sneak out of the date. And as she's trying to sneak out of

514
00:34:32,250 --> 00:34:33,230
Chas:
the date, she's left the bar.

515
00:34:33,330 --> 00:34:36,510
Chas:
She's talking to us, acknowledging that it's a dick move.

516
00:34:36,610 --> 00:34:41,450
Chas:
And throughout the first episode, So, she often refers to herself disparagingly.

517
00:34:42,190 --> 00:34:45,110
Excerpts:
In retrospect, we were both.

518
00:34:47,740 --> 00:34:52,240
Chas:
I like that so early on in the episode, within, I don't know,

519
00:34:52,340 --> 00:34:57,840
Chas:
five minutes tops, they're using the fourth wall to say, you know,

520
00:34:57,860 --> 00:34:59,040
Chas:
we're in an emotional present.

521
00:34:59,200 --> 00:35:04,860
Chas:
She's sharing vulnerable things with us. She's lying to herself and then acknowledging

522
00:35:04,860 --> 00:35:07,940
Chas:
when she's lying to herself, sharing it with us.

523
00:35:08,300 --> 00:35:14,200
Chas:
She's much more closed off, you know, with Clyde and even with Mac and then

524
00:35:14,200 --> 00:35:18,760
Chas:
later on with her employees at the record store. than she is with us.

525
00:35:19,200 --> 00:35:23,140
Stu:
So question then becomes, if she's not talking to the audience,

526
00:35:23,320 --> 00:35:25,180
Stu:
if we're saying that she's kind of talking to a part of herself,

527
00:35:25,340 --> 00:35:28,240
Stu:
what does she want from this part of herself, right?

528
00:35:28,560 --> 00:35:32,880
Stu:
Fight Club, Jack was absolving himself of responsibility, which is somewhat

529
00:35:32,880 --> 00:35:37,060
Stu:
similar to, I think, overall Fleabag, but certainly not the episode we're looking at, right?

530
00:35:37,140 --> 00:35:40,580
Stu:
What does she want from, why is she talking?

531
00:35:40,680 --> 00:35:43,720
Stu:
What is compelling to her to talk? I mean, I think it's understanding.

532
00:35:43,980 --> 00:35:44,440
Chas:
Right?

533
00:35:44,740 --> 00:35:47,400
Mel:
I think so. So I think what you said earlier kind of hit on it.

534
00:35:47,400 --> 00:35:49,440
Mel:
It almost sounds like she's talking to a therapist.

535
00:35:49,600 --> 00:35:50,000
Chas:
Right?

536
00:35:50,120 --> 00:35:53,200
Mel:
She's trying to work herself out in some ways.

537
00:35:53,360 --> 00:35:58,960
Mel:
Like it's the reason a lot of people write in their diary or self-talk or do

538
00:35:58,960 --> 00:36:01,280
Mel:
have a running monologue or encourage that.

539
00:36:01,360 --> 00:36:10,440
Mel:
Like she's trying to understand and explain herself and in doing so maybe hopefully help herself.

540
00:36:11,160 --> 00:36:14,780
Stu:
And that's kind of why it probably works as a piece to camera in the moment,

541
00:36:14,840 --> 00:36:16,220
Stu:
because it's about the emotional presence.

542
00:36:16,280 --> 00:36:19,660
Stu:
So it's both what leads her to make the decisions she does in the moment,

543
00:36:19,760 --> 00:36:24,220
Stu:
and then also like her reflecting on those decisions after they've happened, right?

544
00:36:24,320 --> 00:36:27,840
Stu:
Whereas a voiceover that's coming from the end of the film is usually about

545
00:36:27,840 --> 00:36:32,780
Stu:
justifying the decisions of how did I end up here? How did I make up these bad

546
00:36:32,780 --> 00:36:33,900
Stu:
decisions, right? Right.

547
00:36:34,420 --> 00:36:38,900
Stu:
Not always. Like, I mean, spontaneous isn't as agenda driven with its voiceover,

548
00:36:38,960 --> 00:36:42,660
Stu:
but a lot of voiceover can be like that. But it's different.

549
00:36:42,740 --> 00:36:44,220
Chas:
Even if it was voiceover-

550
00:36:44,900 --> 00:36:48,600
Chas:
in the present tense, like in the moment, like close to thin red line,

551
00:36:48,820 --> 00:36:52,840
Chas:
it would still be distancing in a way that this is not.

552
00:36:53,200 --> 00:36:59,060
Chas:
Other than the fact that they've got a legacy from how the novel is narrated and how the film worked.

553
00:36:59,600 --> 00:37:04,400
Chas:
The reason why breaking the fourth wall for this works differently than voiceover

554
00:37:04,400 --> 00:37:10,740
Chas:
is because it is nearly always about informing us to what the emotional present is,

555
00:37:10,880 --> 00:37:17,760
Chas:
whether that's a lie or not, you know, it is her emotional present.

556
00:37:17,960 --> 00:37:23,000
Mel:
Her current state or current reality. It might be a lie, but that doesn't make it not real.

557
00:37:23,220 --> 00:37:23,400
Chas:
Yeah.

558
00:37:24,260 --> 00:37:27,260
Stu:
All right. So, speaking of not real.

559
00:37:27,480 --> 00:37:27,940
Mel:
Reality.

560
00:37:28,380 --> 00:37:29,420
Stu:
Speaking of reality.

561
00:37:29,540 --> 00:37:29,860
Mel:
Yeah, yeah.

562
00:37:30,100 --> 00:37:31,840
Stu:
Yeah. Should we go to Abbott Elementary?

563
00:37:32,240 --> 00:37:32,740
Chas:
Yes.

564
00:37:32,740 --> 00:37:33,960
Mel:
Abbott Elementary. Yes.

565
00:37:35,140 --> 00:37:39,580
Excerpts:
Okay. Okay, so if the store has ten potatoes, right, and you take away two of

566
00:37:39,580 --> 00:37:42,220
Excerpts:
them, how many potatoes would the store have left?

567
00:37:42,380 --> 00:37:45,340
Excerpts:
Janine, what did I say about taking my potatoes from the lunchroom?

568
00:37:45,560 --> 00:37:47,580
Excerpts:
But visual learning is so much better.

569
00:37:47,920 --> 00:37:51,520
Excerpts:
Well, guess what? Now you have zero potatoes.

570
00:37:55,320 --> 00:37:58,940
Excerpts:
I'm Janine Teagues. I've been teaching here at Abbott Elementary for a year

571
00:37:58,940 --> 00:38:02,900
Excerpts:
now. The staff here is incredible. Finally feeling top of things.

572
00:38:04,260 --> 00:38:08,940
Excerpts:
Cheesesteak. Cheesesteak. This is a classroom, not a hoagie stand.

573
00:38:10,520 --> 00:38:18,460
Excerpts:
Hoagie. We had it on the board. I know this school is rough, but we make do.

574
00:38:19,660 --> 00:38:24,760
Excerpts:
Looking for Ms. Coleman. Hello. What's up? I thought one of my colleagues here

575
00:38:24,760 --> 00:38:27,640
Excerpts:
hired a stripper for me. Okay.

576
00:38:29,780 --> 00:38:34,600
Excerpts:
I'm teaching a lesson on gravity. There have been three presidents since this

577
00:38:34,600 --> 00:38:36,440
Excerpts:
one. Here's where I taped in the others.

578
00:38:40,420 --> 00:38:45,400
Excerpts:
Hey, we're gonna have a good day. We do this because we're supposed to.

579
00:38:45,560 --> 00:38:47,280
Excerpts:
This show ain't the money.

580
00:38:47,480 --> 00:38:49,560
Excerpts:
I can make more work in the street easy.

581
00:38:50,380 --> 00:38:51,940
Excerpts:
We're gonna have a good day.

582
00:38:52,750 --> 00:38:57,790
Chas:
So in the lead up to the discussions for this series of episodes,

583
00:38:58,210 --> 00:39:04,810
Chas:
Sue, you have focused on the lever of diegetic to non-diegetic,

584
00:39:04,910 --> 00:39:06,570
Chas:
to in-world to not in-world.

585
00:39:06,670 --> 00:39:12,430
Chas:
And we started talking about mockumentaries where there is reasons to talk to

586
00:39:12,430 --> 00:39:14,870
Chas:
the camera, but they are not talking to the audience.

587
00:39:15,170 --> 00:39:20,470
Chas:
There's a realistic in-world reason why they are eyeballing someone. one.

588
00:39:20,510 --> 00:39:24,390
Chas:
And it's not us as the audience of the TV show.

589
00:39:24,830 --> 00:39:29,590
Chas:
And I just picked Abbott Elementary out of, you know, we were tossing around,

590
00:39:29,750 --> 00:39:35,070
Chas:
you know, The Office and Parks and Rec, and it's just a recency bias.

591
00:39:35,190 --> 00:39:41,430
Chas:
And it's my current soul bomb show for when you're like in a dark place and

592
00:39:41,430 --> 00:39:43,750
Chas:
you need to be lifted out of that dark place.

593
00:39:43,890 --> 00:39:48,710
Chas:
It's Abbott Elementary, which is, it follows the teachers and principal of a

594
00:39:48,710 --> 00:39:51,030
Chas:
primary school in Philadelphia,

595
00:39:51,490 --> 00:39:55,570
Chas:
a public primary school, which is important for the episode that we've chosen,

596
00:39:55,770 --> 00:40:02,990
Chas:
which the episode we've chosen is Ad Attack, which is in season two, is it episode seven?

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00:40:03,090 --> 00:40:03,310
Stu:
Yes.

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00:40:03,490 --> 00:40:08,570
Chas:
And it's the reason why I picked it is because the fact that they are being

599
00:40:08,570 --> 00:40:16,670
Chas:
filmed and followed by a camera crew becomes an important plot point in the actual show.

600
00:40:16,930 --> 00:40:23,410
Chas:
So, in this particular episode, an attack ad from a charter school comes out

601
00:40:23,410 --> 00:40:29,450
Chas:
and they're going, how did they get all this footage of us as teachers in this attack ad?

602
00:40:29,610 --> 00:40:36,070
Chas:
And it turns out that they all just assumed that the crew, camera crew for the

603
00:40:36,070 --> 00:40:41,130
Chas:
attack ad was the same camera crew as the mockumentary team.

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00:40:41,570 --> 00:40:45,190
Mel:
Including the fact, which of course is amusing to anyone who works in film and

605
00:40:45,190 --> 00:40:47,210
Mel:
has worked, that they signed release forms.

606
00:40:47,590 --> 00:40:50,970
Excerpts:
To be clear, this camera crew trespassed, right?

607
00:40:51,350 --> 00:40:56,110
Excerpts:
Well, actually I let them in. Okay, but they used your likeness without consent.

608
00:40:57,070 --> 00:41:01,470
Excerpts:
Yeah, well, we did sign these. But they misrepresented what they were doing?

609
00:41:01,890 --> 00:41:06,330
Excerpts:
Well, they did say they were coming to get footage of us, which they did.

610
00:41:06,550 --> 00:41:13,350
Excerpts:
Yeah. Okay, so what I'm seeing here is you guys just failed to pay attention to what was happening.

611
00:41:13,530 --> 00:41:16,530
Excerpts:
You have absolutely no case. And in fact, according to this,

612
00:41:16,630 --> 00:41:22,110
Excerpts:
you might each owe Legendary Charters $200 for crew fees.

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00:41:23,470 --> 00:41:26,150
Mel:
They're like, oh, can't we take that? And they're like, no, I signed the forms.

614
00:41:26,290 --> 00:41:29,150
Mel:
We thought, you know, because they thought the producer just asked him to sign more forms.

615
00:41:29,210 --> 00:41:33,630
Mel:
You get to a point where you're just like, yeah, you're signing your life away all the time.

616
00:41:33,730 --> 00:41:36,030
Mel:
So they're like, oh, we could just have them take the foot. but no,

617
00:41:36,070 --> 00:41:39,230
Mel:
they have legal rights to all of this footage in every way. Here's all of the

618
00:41:39,230 --> 00:41:40,470
Mel:
paperwork that you signed.

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00:41:40,650 --> 00:41:44,730
Chas:
Yeah. And it has that amazing line from Ava that we'll accept.

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00:41:44,970 --> 00:41:47,930
Excerpts:
How did we even get this footage? Yeah. A camera crew came in.

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00:41:49,110 --> 00:41:52,450
Excerpts:
I thought it was one of them. Oh, like y'all can tell these moderately attractive

622
00:41:52,450 --> 00:41:55,030
Excerpts:
white men with beards apart. What's even under there?

623
00:41:55,350 --> 00:41:56,210
Mel:
Oh, soundies.

624
00:41:56,350 --> 00:41:59,330
Stu:
Damn, I get myself confused with other people all the time.

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00:41:59,490 --> 00:42:05,610
Chas:
Well, didn't we post it on Discord, that picture of Jason Alexander looking

626
00:42:05,610 --> 00:42:08,770
Chas:
exactly like you? Hey, hey, hey.

627
00:42:09,950 --> 00:42:14,270
Stu:
Not exactly. He's got a little bit more hair on front with that incredible criminal

628
00:42:14,270 --> 00:42:16,130
Stu:
minds white hair. anyway.

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00:42:16,130 --> 00:42:18,990
Chas:
So just to add to the summary that the

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Chas:
the main characters are there's a

631
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Chas:
quintet of classroom teachers so

632
00:42:26,270 --> 00:42:29,090
Chas:
janine's the lead and she's kind of

633
00:42:29,090 --> 00:42:32,090
Chas:
really the point of view character she started teaching with the very beginning

634
00:42:32,090 --> 00:42:37,870
Chas:
of the series and so this is her second or third year now and then greg with

635
00:42:37,870 --> 00:42:45,310
Chas:
whom there's a unresolved romantic tension barb who is the like very experienced

636
00:42:45,310 --> 00:42:48,090
Chas:
kind of super teacher that everyone respects.

637
00:42:48,090 --> 00:42:49,110
Stu:
And who.

638
00:42:49,110 --> 00:42:56,210
Chas:
Are the other miss shementi the um kind of philadelphia cliche philadelphia.

639
00:42:56,210 --> 00:42:58,070
Mel:
And italian cliche bless.

640
00:42:59,950 --> 00:43:02,950
Stu:
Melissa and their and their principals ava right whose

641
00:43:02,950 --> 00:43:05,870
Stu:
idea is to do the documentary so in the pilot because i

642
00:43:05,870 --> 00:43:09,150
Stu:
watched the pilot to hear the setup and then i watched um the

643
00:43:09,150 --> 00:43:12,010
Stu:
the attack episode it's ava's idea

644
00:43:12,010 --> 00:43:16,570
Stu:
to bring the documentary crew to kind of bring attention to the plights of being

645
00:43:16,570 --> 00:43:22,670
Stu:
a inner city public school and it kind of works because ava as we'll see out

646
00:43:22,670 --> 00:43:29,250
Stu:
is kind of a tone deaf principal she's very kind of just i mean i'm not even sure she means well um,

647
00:43:30,590 --> 00:43:34,830
Stu:
there's kind of like a narcissism to her particularly set up in the pilot about

648
00:43:34,830 --> 00:43:37,730
Stu:
it and so that's why she's brought so they've even set up an in-story world

649
00:43:37,730 --> 00:43:41,550
Stu:
reason for why the documentary crew is there, right?

650
00:43:41,750 --> 00:43:44,050
Stu:
And also why they have so much access.

651
00:43:44,450 --> 00:43:51,710
Chas:
And there's three, I guess, styles. I don't know about styles is the right word, but- Modes?

652
00:43:52,070 --> 00:43:57,010
Chas:
Yeah. So there's the traditional mockumentary. The bulk of the narrative is

653
00:43:57,010 --> 00:44:02,950
Chas:
a camera crew following around and the characters somewhat behaving as if there's

654
00:44:02,950 --> 00:44:07,410
Chas:
not a camera there to an extent, as much as they can.

655
00:44:07,410 --> 00:44:11,630
Chas:
And then they have pieces deliberately to camera where they've been sat down

656
00:44:11,630 --> 00:44:16,910
Chas:
often by themselves to give an interview and Then there are these separate moments where,

657
00:44:17,810 --> 00:44:21,870
Chas:
And there's so many laughs in them, but it's definitely going to be something

658
00:44:21,870 --> 00:44:27,250
Chas:
that I'll focus on in my key learnings here, where the characters remember that

659
00:44:27,250 --> 00:44:29,690
Chas:
they're being filmed, and then they look down the camera.

660
00:44:29,810 --> 00:44:34,510
Chas:
And it's often not to say anything at all. It's just this silent acknowledgement

661
00:44:34,510 --> 00:44:37,030
Chas:
that, oh, shit, this is being filmed.

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00:44:37,430 --> 00:44:41,430
Mel:
So, like, I think that this episode is a great one to pick because it's got

663
00:44:41,430 --> 00:44:44,170
Mel:
four really clear examples of all of those.

664
00:44:44,950 --> 00:44:47,130
Mel:
But, Stu, did you have something before that?

665
00:44:47,130 --> 00:44:50,690
Stu:
Yeah, I'm leading with my thing about control, right?

666
00:44:50,810 --> 00:44:55,230
Stu:
Do they have control over the story or over the narrative? And the answer is neither particularly.

667
00:44:55,650 --> 00:45:00,530
Stu:
This is what makes this such an interesting form of, and I think maybe the appeal of it,

668
00:45:00,630 --> 00:45:03,770
Stu:
is that the characters can obviously have control over what they say,

669
00:45:03,850 --> 00:45:07,990
Stu:
but I get no sense of this feeling that they have control of how their story

670
00:45:07,990 --> 00:45:11,990
Stu:
is being represented in terms of the filmmaking or otherwise, okay?

671
00:45:11,990 --> 00:45:14,470
Stu:
And so that means like to have a hypothetical moment.

672
00:45:14,550 --> 00:45:17,370
Stu:
And I can't remember if it even happens in this episode, but like where a character

673
00:45:17,370 --> 00:45:21,390
Stu:
has a breakdown and runs off, the camera is in this story is completely within

674
00:45:21,390 --> 00:45:24,270
Stu:
the rules of the world to like, I'm going to be intrusive and following them,

675
00:45:24,350 --> 00:45:26,450
Stu:
follow them into the bathroom where they're having a breakdown.

676
00:45:26,610 --> 00:45:29,130
Stu:
I don't think this happens in an episode, but it's an example of something.

677
00:45:29,310 --> 00:45:32,990
Stu:
Whereas I think in High Fidelity, if she was like, I'm out, nope.

678
00:45:33,070 --> 00:45:35,410
Stu:
And doesn't want the camera to follow her, it wouldn't.

679
00:45:35,530 --> 00:45:40,450
Stu:
I think Fleabag is interesting because I think there is possibilities it would, right?

680
00:45:40,610 --> 00:45:44,290
Stu:
That their camera is a little bit, because I think Fleabag psychology is a little

681
00:45:44,290 --> 00:45:45,810
Stu:
bit more intrusive thoughts.

682
00:45:46,410 --> 00:45:50,310
Stu:
And so I think the fact that the camera crew here has a degree of autonomy over

683
00:45:50,310 --> 00:45:53,550
Stu:
the storytelling just gives us access to the characters more differently.

684
00:45:53,710 --> 00:45:56,750
Stu:
And it's an ensemble. That also helps.

685
00:45:57,250 --> 00:45:59,890
Stu:
We're getting multiple point of views of the characters, right?

686
00:46:00,030 --> 00:46:04,370
Stu:
The whole attack ad metaphor is about the fact that they have no control over

687
00:46:04,370 --> 00:46:05,710
Stu:
their representation, right?

688
00:46:05,830 --> 00:46:09,030
Stu:
Because these other the crew make you know makes them look worse uh

689
00:46:09,030 --> 00:46:11,790
Stu:
than they actually are and i think i'm gonna say it

690
00:46:11,790 --> 00:46:14,490
Stu:
now much probably to the embarrassment of my parents both my parents are

691
00:46:14,490 --> 00:46:17,270
Stu:
public high school teachers and you know

692
00:46:17,270 --> 00:46:22,050
Stu:
teachers work incredibly hard and it's nice to see a show that um recognizes

693
00:46:22,050 --> 00:46:27,310
Stu:
that and kind of does it so endearingly as much as it's like oh let's do a mockumentary

694
00:46:27,310 --> 00:46:32,390
Stu:
and make laughs of it i don't think it's ever um belittling the profession or

695
00:46:32,390 --> 00:46:34,730
Stu:
most of the teachers i think I think it belittles Ava a little bit,

696
00:46:34,770 --> 00:46:35,610
Stu:
but even then, not really.

697
00:46:35,790 --> 00:46:42,670
Chas:
Yeah, but it's belittling principals. Yes. And as I'm the son of a high school

698
00:46:42,670 --> 00:46:46,370
Chas:
principal, and I think that is a-okay to belittle principals.

699
00:46:46,870 --> 00:46:47,310
Stu:
Correct.

700
00:46:50,190 --> 00:46:57,470
Chas:
So, we've got the different instances of when the character's talking to camera or not.

701
00:46:57,850 --> 00:47:01,190
Chas:
What do you think they want? What do you think the characters want?

702
00:47:01,190 --> 00:47:04,990
Chas:
Want when they're doing the performance pieces, like the two camera interviews

703
00:47:04,990 --> 00:47:07,370
Chas:
and they know they're being interviewed and they're not just in the midst of

704
00:47:07,370 --> 00:47:11,790
Chas:
their day-to-day work life as against those moments where they...

705
00:47:12,750 --> 00:47:14,770
Chas:
Are kind of drawn to look down the barrel.

706
00:47:14,770 --> 00:47:17,590
Mel:
Well i think so i'll give you my four examples because

707
00:47:17,590 --> 00:47:20,430
Mel:
i think they all want something slightly different so the

708
00:47:20,430 --> 00:47:25,950
Mel:
the episode opens with gregory side-eyeing the camera with a smirk because he's

709
00:47:25,950 --> 00:47:30,410
Mel:
he's knows what is going on within the scene and he's like this is philly it

710
00:47:30,410 --> 00:47:36,410
Mel:
also ends with him looking at the camera so it opens and closes and And Gregory

711
00:47:36,410 --> 00:47:39,550
Mel:
is the character that wants some sympathy.

712
00:47:40,410 --> 00:47:44,390
Mel:
And this is interesting, right? Because if we're assuming it's a mockumentary,

713
00:47:44,390 --> 00:47:45,450
Mel:
then he wants it from the audience.

714
00:47:45,590 --> 00:47:48,150
Mel:
But I think he also, within universe, clearly wants it from the crew.

715
00:47:48,210 --> 00:47:52,030
Mel:
Like, you guys have been following me for years now. You see how this is, right?

716
00:47:52,250 --> 00:47:56,510
Mel:
Then we've got the testimonial. So Janine wants to put her best foot forward.

717
00:47:56,670 --> 00:48:02,290
Mel:
She wants to talk about the school. She's always, always pitching and trying

718
00:48:02,290 --> 00:48:04,930
Mel:
to get things for the school and what they need.

719
00:48:04,930 --> 00:48:08,650
Mel:
You've got ava's protestation of

720
00:48:08,650 --> 00:48:11,730
Mel:
like oh we thought the camera crew was you right like she's trying to

721
00:48:11,730 --> 00:48:16,170
Mel:
claim her innocence and and and also it's a little bit of explaining herself

722
00:48:16,170 --> 00:48:22,210
Mel:
right like this is this is what happened ah and then the fourth instance which

723
00:48:22,210 --> 00:48:26,830
Mel:
i think is hilarious is you've got a student who breaks the fourth wall and

724
00:48:26,830 --> 00:48:29,850
Mel:
talks to the cameras like oh i'm leaving i I can do what I want.

725
00:48:30,490 --> 00:48:34,630
Excerpts:
Joshua, how could you? I didn't. My mom did, you dork. Damn.

726
00:48:36,310 --> 00:48:38,930
Excerpts:
I'm leaving. I can talk all I want now.

727
00:48:39,290 --> 00:48:43,170
Mel:
And he is just, I mean, he's clearly the class clown. He's got an audience.

728
00:48:43,510 --> 00:48:47,910
Mel:
It's not just us. For him, it's the camera crew, you know? So he's trying to

729
00:48:47,910 --> 00:48:52,430
Mel:
get that bit of attention and, you know, I'll be on film.

730
00:48:52,490 --> 00:48:56,190
Mel:
I'll be, you know, immortalized forever, you know, the same way that if you're filming outside,

731
00:48:56,450 --> 00:48:59,270
Mel:
you have everyone driving down the street, you know, honking or trying to jump in

732
00:48:59,270 --> 00:49:02,070
Mel:
front of the camera or annoying news reporters or whatever

733
00:49:02,070 --> 00:49:05,070
Mel:
right like let me have my my five seconds notice how

734
00:49:05,070 --> 00:49:08,190
Mel:
funny i am and i think so what they want

735
00:49:08,190 --> 00:49:13,150
Mel:
is all contextual and i think changes um depending on the character and depending

736
00:49:13,150 --> 00:49:19,090
Mel:
on what they're doing but it uses all of these different techniques not just

737
00:49:19,090 --> 00:49:23,850
Mel:
different characters and different wants to sort of move that lever depending

738
00:49:23,850 --> 00:49:27,370
Mel:
on how they're addressing what they're saying as well.

739
00:49:27,930 --> 00:49:33,730
Stu:
I'm just going to insert myself here just because my ADHD brain says go before I've forgotten it.

740
00:49:33,810 --> 00:49:36,770
Stu:
I think what's interesting about this is a metaphor which tied,

741
00:49:36,950 --> 00:49:39,870
Stu:
like, not a metaphor, but coming to the agenda, what does the person talking?

742
00:49:40,050 --> 00:49:42,910
Stu:
The filmmakers have an agenda.

743
00:49:43,050 --> 00:49:43,550
Chas:
Right?

744
00:49:43,650 --> 00:49:47,350
Stu:
As in the documentary crew, I do think is trying to make this school look good.

745
00:49:47,450 --> 00:49:50,990
Stu:
Like, it's trying to be warts and all, but there's a humanist quality to what they're doing.

746
00:49:51,070 --> 00:49:55,550
Stu:
And that is shown up in contrast to the Attack ad, where the schools are called

747
00:49:55,550 --> 00:49:58,430
Stu:
legendary. I think it's not Tariq. I can't remember the name.

748
00:49:59,250 --> 00:50:00,150
Stu:
Draymond, maybe?

749
00:50:00,270 --> 00:50:00,790
Chas:
Yeah, Draymond.

750
00:50:00,990 --> 00:50:05,410
Stu:
The CEO of the other schools. It reveals that basically he's trying to poach

751
00:50:05,410 --> 00:50:07,910
Stu:
Barbara, the best teacher. He's the only one that she looks good.

752
00:50:08,070 --> 00:50:10,730
Stu:
And he's trying to, in a way, get her to come to the school.

753
00:50:10,830 --> 00:50:14,510
Stu:
So obviously the agenda is don't send your kids to Abbott, send them to us.

754
00:50:14,710 --> 00:50:18,470
Stu:
But also I think there's a more subtle thing going on about where he wants Barbara

755
00:50:18,470 --> 00:50:19,430
Stu:
to come and work with him.

756
00:50:19,590 --> 00:50:22,490
Stu:
And I think if you're doing a mockumentary, thinking about the point of view

757
00:50:22,490 --> 00:50:27,670
Stu:
of the camera crew is really useful.

758
00:50:27,790 --> 00:50:28,330
Chas:
Yeah. Right?

759
00:50:28,330 --> 00:50:32,410
Stu:
Right? I think you kind of got to have a point of view about what is their agenda

760
00:50:32,410 --> 00:50:33,830
Stu:
here. What is it that they want?

761
00:50:33,990 --> 00:50:37,890
Chas:
You've mentioned the pieces to camera. I mean, Draymond does have his own pieces

762
00:50:37,890 --> 00:50:39,270
Chas:
to camera. We've got the class clown.

763
00:50:39,490 --> 00:50:45,210
Chas:
We've got the opening where Ava is talking about that interview where she's

764
00:50:45,210 --> 00:50:48,170
Chas:
going to get all of her ex's stuff out of her apartment.

765
00:50:48,190 --> 00:50:50,230
Mel:
Janine's getting all of her ex's stuff out of the apartment.

766
00:50:50,350 --> 00:50:51,210
Chas:
Thank you. Janine is.

767
00:50:51,430 --> 00:50:55,190
Excerpts:
Tariq is in town. So I asked him to grab the rest of his stuff.

768
00:50:55,430 --> 00:51:00,430
Excerpts:
I decided that when your relationship is 100% over, your ex shouldn't be keeping

769
00:51:00,430 --> 00:51:02,930
Excerpts:
like 90% of his things at your place.

770
00:51:04,210 --> 00:51:08,470
Excerpts:
His Pokemon plush toy, Charmeleon, he said it was the only thing that understood him.

771
00:51:08,650 --> 00:51:13,130
Excerpts:
Dragon Ball Z, Gundam figures, Attack on Titan, a lot of anime.

772
00:51:14,150 --> 00:51:20,050
Excerpts:
Wait, I think the last one was manga. He would always get sad when I confused the two.

773
00:51:20,050 --> 00:51:23,050
Chas:
And in those pieces

774
00:51:23,050 --> 00:51:25,930
Chas:
to camera what i love about them is that

775
00:51:25,930 --> 00:51:29,330
Chas:
they allow the characters to say

776
00:51:29,330 --> 00:51:32,070
Chas:
things to the camera that they've got a

777
00:51:32,070 --> 00:51:35,410
Chas:
different relationship with the camera crew than they have with their workplace

778
00:51:35,410 --> 00:51:39,730
Chas:
and that when they're alone they will say things differently to the camera crew

779
00:51:39,730 --> 00:51:44,650
Chas:
then they'll say when they're around their colleagues and it's still performative

780
00:51:44,650 --> 00:51:50,550
Chas:
but but But that is Janine lying to herself because then the whole episode arc is about her,

781
00:51:50,670 --> 00:51:55,970
Chas:
like, potentially slowly getting re-entangled with her ex and everyone trying

782
00:51:55,970 --> 00:51:58,530
Chas:
to stop her from doing that.

783
00:51:59,200 --> 00:52:02,780
Chas:
But then you've also got those wonderful characters like Ava is part of the

784
00:52:02,780 --> 00:52:08,120
Chas:
jokes that she gets is because she says exactly the same thing in her to camera

785
00:52:08,120 --> 00:52:11,040
Chas:
pieces as she would around her colleagues.

786
00:52:11,100 --> 00:52:18,920
Chas:
She has no filter and acts just as unprofessionally in or just as Ava-ish in all contexts.

787
00:52:19,700 --> 00:52:24,200
Chas:
Those beats where they eyeball the camera, I was trying to like group them all

788
00:52:24,200 --> 00:52:29,500
Chas:
together. together and they're always, again, like in High Fidelity,

789
00:52:29,780 --> 00:52:33,060
Chas:
they're prompting the audience to go, what are they feeling?

790
00:52:33,280 --> 00:52:37,140
Chas:
And I could imagine in the screenplay, I haven't read any of the scripts,

791
00:52:37,360 --> 00:52:42,520
Chas:
but I could imagine, you know, it would be go answer camera and then just after

792
00:52:42,520 --> 00:52:45,100
Chas:
it, you could say whatever the emotion that that character is feeling,

793
00:52:45,240 --> 00:52:52,440
Chas:
whether it's embarrassment or regret or Or did you just fucking see that or

794
00:52:52,440 --> 00:52:58,000
Chas:
whatever it is, because it's so clearly takes a moment for us to go.

795
00:52:58,340 --> 00:53:02,000
Chas:
As soon as they look at us, it makes us go, why are they looking at us?

796
00:53:02,040 --> 00:53:04,380
Chas:
What, what do they want from us?

797
00:53:04,600 --> 00:53:10,160
Chas:
And it's nearly always a measure of, yeah, it's some kind of emotions that they're different.

798
00:53:10,540 --> 00:53:14,720
Chas:
Often it, you know, it's might be embarrassment about Ava or another character,

799
00:53:14,800 --> 00:53:18,740
Chas:
or it will be embarrassment about something that they just did or were caught

800
00:53:18,740 --> 00:53:21,020
Chas:
doing, but it's about being understood.

801
00:53:21,260 --> 00:53:25,380
Chas:
And it allows us access in a professional workplace setting for people who are

802
00:53:25,380 --> 00:53:27,880
Chas:
being observed by a camera crew.

803
00:53:28,080 --> 00:53:31,240
Chas:
It still gives us access to what's going on inside.

804
00:53:31,560 --> 00:53:35,140
Mel:
Yeah, I think that it is. And I think it's about being seen.

805
00:53:35,480 --> 00:53:38,180
Mel:
I think it's a big, like, if you had to really boil it down,

806
00:53:38,300 --> 00:53:42,080
Mel:
like you have, you know, high fidelity is about understanding and being understood.

807
00:53:42,160 --> 00:53:46,240
Mel:
And Abbott Elementary is about being understood and being scene.

808
00:53:46,240 --> 00:53:51,100
Chas:
Specifically. There was one line in this particular episode that I enjoyed.

809
00:53:51,180 --> 00:53:55,640
Chas:
It was simple punchline humor, but it stood out to me because Miss Chimenti,

810
00:53:55,760 --> 00:54:00,800
Chas:
they were asking her, how did she get Draymond's phone number?

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Excerpts:
I did it.

812
00:54:03,170 --> 00:54:08,350
Excerpts:
I found the dirty rat in charge of legendary charters. Melissa Schlemente comes through again.

813
00:54:08,810 --> 00:54:13,990
Excerpts:
How'd you do it? Oh, I've got my ways. I Googled it. But I like to maintain

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00:54:13,990 --> 00:54:15,110
Excerpts:
that air of dark mystery.

815
00:54:17,230 --> 00:54:20,870
Chas:
She then, I mean, it's a funny joke. It's good for character.

816
00:54:21,390 --> 00:54:26,110
Chas:
But I'm interested that they had so many different ways of doing that joke.

817
00:54:26,250 --> 00:54:32,750
Chas:
They could have cut to footage that they had where she was unaware that they're watching her Google it.

818
00:54:33,170 --> 00:54:36,910
Chas:
That would still give the same joke, but it would be undermining her.

819
00:54:37,190 --> 00:54:42,330
Chas:
Whereas her doing it to camera and being proud of it. And she's not proud that

820
00:54:42,330 --> 00:54:43,210
Chas:
she found the phone number.

821
00:54:43,530 --> 00:54:48,070
Chas:
She's proud of how her colleagues see and fear her and think of her as this

822
00:54:48,070 --> 00:54:51,790
Chas:
like underworld mobster kind of character.

823
00:54:52,130 --> 00:54:57,430
Stu:
And I'm going to jump to the opening of speaking of other little clever things,

824
00:54:57,630 --> 00:55:00,990
Stu:
the opening of episodes one and two of season three, right?

825
00:55:01,130 --> 00:55:04,310
Stu:
Because effectively there is a time jump. It basically starts in the present

826
00:55:04,310 --> 00:55:05,690
Stu:
and then does it five months earlier.

827
00:55:05,850 --> 00:55:11,130
Stu:
And then there is a reveal of an exchange between Jeffrey and Janine,

828
00:55:11,230 --> 00:55:17,190
Stu:
where the way they do it is they have Ava lead the camera crew.

829
00:55:17,330 --> 00:55:21,330
Stu:
She leads the camera crew into a security closet and loads up security camera

830
00:55:21,330 --> 00:55:25,330
Stu:
footage, and they're filming the security camera footage being played back of

831
00:55:25,330 --> 00:55:29,690
Stu:
this kind of moment, this confrontation that the camera crew didn't have access to. Janine?

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00:55:30,270 --> 00:55:34,950
Excerpts:
Yeah, no, we're fine. It's just nothing weird.

833
00:55:35,350 --> 00:55:37,790
Excerpts:
Oh, hell yeah, something weird is going on between Gregory and Janine.

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00:55:37,970 --> 00:55:39,630
Excerpts:
They ain't tell you. Well, lucky

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00:55:39,630 --> 00:55:42,910
Excerpts:
for y'all, my hidden cameras picked up everything. Y'all gonna love this.

836
00:55:44,810 --> 00:55:48,610
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Hey. Hey. That was a fun hang the other night, right? It was.

837
00:55:48,670 --> 00:55:50,190
Excerpts:
I really liked that place. Me too.

838
00:55:50,470 --> 00:55:55,170
Stu:
And I thought that was just a great found footage solution to the problem of

839
00:55:55,170 --> 00:55:59,110
Stu:
we want to have a moment of intimacy between these characters, right?

840
00:55:59,110 --> 00:56:02,250
Stu:
Of actual genuine kind of them revealing their private selves,

841
00:56:02,330 --> 00:56:05,190
Stu:
which I don't think they would have done, but found a really good way to do

842
00:56:05,190 --> 00:56:09,110
Stu:
on camera because there is an awareness of the characters that they are being filmed.

843
00:56:09,310 --> 00:56:12,570
Stu:
And I think that moment would have played differently. And by making it a security

844
00:56:12,570 --> 00:56:16,790
Stu:
camera footage, and we completely believe that Ava's like, oh yeah,

845
00:56:16,870 --> 00:56:20,530
Stu:
of course one, she's got cameras, but two, that she's like held onto this for

846
00:56:20,530 --> 00:56:22,030
Stu:
five months that kind of fills us in.

847
00:56:22,170 --> 00:56:28,290
Stu:
It's a very clever diegetic solution to the problem, Which I think the show

848
00:56:28,290 --> 00:56:33,670
Stu:
navigates very well, which is there's a degree of awareness of the crew with

849
00:56:33,670 --> 00:56:35,010
Stu:
the cameras being around,

850
00:56:35,250 --> 00:56:37,490
Stu:
right? That there is an element of.

851
00:56:38,180 --> 00:56:41,120
Stu:
Not performativeness there's obviously moments that they kind of get relaxed

852
00:56:41,120 --> 00:56:44,780
Stu:
and i don't know if the show does it but the idea that maybe from episode one

853
00:56:44,780 --> 00:56:49,060
Stu:
in season one to episode 10 the cast seemed to get more and more relaxed but

854
00:56:49,060 --> 00:56:53,380
Stu:
i that particular moment between jeffrey and janine i don't think i would have

855
00:56:53,380 --> 00:56:59,020
Stu:
bought would have happened as it did if the crew was in that room it was a solution for it yeah.

856
00:56:59,020 --> 00:57:02,680
Mel:
I can't wait till you read the thing that i wrote about the season three finale

857
00:57:02,680 --> 00:57:06,280
Mel:
i have to watch the season three finale before you i.

858
00:57:06,280 --> 00:57:08,520
Stu:
Have to watch three seasons Watch it.

859
00:57:08,600 --> 00:57:12,040
Mel:
And there's a whole thing because I love what the season three finale specifically

860
00:57:12,040 --> 00:57:15,000
Mel:
does, Stu, with what you're just talking about.

861
00:57:15,000 --> 00:57:18,000
Chas:
This show mel you made the comment in uh in our

862
00:57:18,000 --> 00:57:20,900
Chas:
pre-chat about like this show doesn't feel

863
00:57:20,900 --> 00:57:27,200
Chas:
revolutionary it feels like a sitcom with characters and telling x number of

864
00:57:27,200 --> 00:57:30,920
Chas:
jokes and having space for ad breaks and previous two first two seasons had

865
00:57:30,920 --> 00:57:35,120
Chas:
22 episodes and you know the mockumentary format has been done before but it

866
00:57:35,120 --> 00:57:39,560
Chas:
does feel i think quite revolutionary in that

867
00:57:39,940 --> 00:57:43,600
Chas:
this is one of the first ones where they, it's not every episode,

868
00:57:43,720 --> 00:57:47,040
Chas:
but where they are like deliberately talking to the crew.

869
00:57:47,160 --> 00:57:50,380
Chas:
So in this episode and in the episode you're talking about, Stu,

870
00:57:50,500 --> 00:57:55,140
Chas:
season three, episode one, it starts out with Ava laughing at them because they

871
00:57:55,140 --> 00:58:00,140
Chas:
got robbed and then the camera crew asks her to tell them the story.

872
00:58:00,840 --> 00:58:02,600
Excerpts:
You want me to tell you what happened to you?

873
00:58:03,650 --> 00:58:07,050
Excerpts:
All right, tell the people. So they got robbed because they thought it'd be

874
00:58:07,050 --> 00:58:09,310
Excerpts:
cute to walk around West Philly at night with all this camera equipment.

875
00:58:09,690 --> 00:58:11,350
Excerpts:
Hell, I'd have helped rob you if I was there.

876
00:58:12,030 --> 00:58:15,390
Excerpts:
Anyway, here we are five months later because that's how long it takes for three

877
00:58:15,390 --> 00:58:17,130
Excerpts:
people with art degrees to save up for new cameras.

878
00:58:17,710 --> 00:58:20,750
Excerpts:
Welcome back. It's career day today. Unfortunately.

879
00:58:21,730 --> 00:58:26,350
Chas:
That interaction with they are aware that a documentary is being made of them.

880
00:58:26,350 --> 00:58:29,690
Chas:
And your example of how do

881
00:58:29,690 --> 00:58:32,830
Chas:
we get access to that janine and greg moment without

882
00:58:32,830 --> 00:58:35,610
Chas:
them feeling like they're being

883
00:58:35,610 --> 00:58:38,610
Chas:
watched and also narratively accounting

884
00:58:38,610 --> 00:58:41,870
Chas:
for the time jump and allowing them to just you

885
00:58:41,870 --> 00:58:44,870
Chas:
know create some new relationships as they come into a new season

886
00:58:44,870 --> 00:58:47,950
Chas:
is genius like that ava's got

887
00:58:47,950 --> 00:58:51,390
Chas:
yet another diegetic camera that

888
00:58:51,390 --> 00:58:55,970
Chas:
some characters aware of others are not and then i just love the coverage of

889
00:58:55,970 --> 00:59:02,410
Chas:
it because she's got cameras on each of them and the the mockumentary crew camera

890
00:59:02,410 --> 00:59:08,450
Chas:
is panning for coverage between the tv screens depending on who it wants to

891
00:59:08,450 --> 00:59:11,290
Chas:
be whose face they want to be looking at it's.

892
00:59:11,290 --> 00:59:13,870
Mel:
Very playful with the format in.

893
00:59:13,870 --> 00:59:14,550
Chas:
Ways that.

894
00:59:14,550 --> 00:59:18,950
Mel:
A lot of things like the office once it's sort of set up it sort of stays a

895
00:59:18,950 --> 00:59:21,270
Mel:
lot of the time within that that sort

896
00:59:21,390 --> 00:59:25,590
Mel:
of, you know, space that it's established in the first few episodes,

897
00:59:25,610 --> 00:59:29,770
Mel:
whereas this Abbott Elementary does get a little bit more playful with it.

898
00:59:29,890 --> 00:59:33,790
Stu:
With the form, yeah. I mean, my feeling is that the office, the documentary,

899
00:59:34,110 --> 00:59:37,970
Stu:
I think the English office isn't as playful, but I think the English office

900
00:59:37,970 --> 00:59:42,850
Stu:
actually leans a little bit more into the documentary aspect that the American office does.

901
00:59:42,990 --> 00:59:46,390
Stu:
The American office becomes a little bit like, oh, it's just a conceit,

902
00:59:46,390 --> 00:59:49,370
Stu:
whereas I think what they kind of have, Now, I mean, maybe it's just the limited

903
00:59:49,370 --> 00:59:52,170
Stu:
season thing with the English office. I don't know.

904
00:59:52,760 --> 00:59:57,580
Chas:
It's like the crash zooms in Succession, like they faded away throughout the show.

905
00:59:57,840 --> 01:00:03,080
Stu:
Yeah, the mockumentary element of the America in the Office ended up being the interviews, right?

906
01:00:03,160 --> 01:00:06,980
Stu:
That's like what they held the most to with the punchlines and those kinds of

907
01:00:06,980 --> 01:00:10,280
Stu:
the characters commenting on stuff and getting humor out of it,

908
01:00:10,340 --> 01:00:14,060
Stu:
as opposed to let's kind of lean into a little bit more into the reality of

909
01:00:14,060 --> 01:00:15,460
Stu:
what it would be like to have a crew here.

910
01:00:15,580 --> 01:00:18,700
Stu:
And I think the metaness of them allowing this other crew to come in and they

911
01:00:18,700 --> 01:00:22,780
Stu:
just signed a bunch of forms, it completely tracks. It completely tracks when

912
01:00:22,780 --> 01:00:26,460
Stu:
you get people to sign forms and even that season three opening where we find

913
01:00:26,460 --> 01:00:28,000
Stu:
out that the camera crew had their gear stolen.

914
01:00:29,280 --> 01:00:33,900
Stu:
You know, that line about art students. People who work in the arts have to

915
01:00:33,900 --> 01:00:35,540
Stu:
save up for five months buying new cameras.

916
01:00:35,900 --> 01:00:38,700
Stu:
There's like, you know, you talked about the fact that there was like,

917
01:00:38,780 --> 01:00:42,240
Stu:
do they interact with the crew? I feel that they do.

918
01:00:42,440 --> 01:00:43,000
Chas:
Right?

919
01:00:43,160 --> 01:00:46,740
Stu:
That there is just a degree of it. But it's not that the crew is commenting

920
01:00:46,740 --> 01:00:49,960
Stu:
on them, but I feel like there is a little bit of a sense, Ava,

921
01:00:50,020 --> 01:00:52,820
Stu:
particularly in that moment that we talked about in the security office where

922
01:00:52,820 --> 01:00:56,240
Stu:
she kind of like waves the crew over. There's a degree of interactivity there with the crew.

923
01:00:56,520 --> 01:01:01,840
Chas:
I think in terms of that question of who are the characters communicating with

924
01:01:01,840 --> 01:01:05,700
Chas:
when they're looking down the barrel of the camera is very different when they're

925
01:01:05,700 --> 01:01:09,040
Chas:
doing those interview performance moments where they are,

926
01:01:09,120 --> 01:01:13,100
Chas:
I'm being interviewed and I know that whom I'm talking to is an audience of

927
01:01:13,100 --> 01:01:15,080
Chas:
whatever this documentary is going to be.

928
01:01:15,120 --> 01:01:18,260
Chas:
They're not talking to the camera crew, but separately, you know,

929
01:01:18,280 --> 01:01:20,600
Chas:
they do have a relationship when they're looking at the camera,

930
01:01:20,640 --> 01:01:23,940
Chas:
when they're looking at the camera crew and the audience is different.

931
01:01:24,480 --> 01:01:24,960
Stu:
Agreed.

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Stu:
Are we done with Abbott Elementary?

973
01:04:11,550 --> 01:04:11,950
Chas:
Yeah.

974
01:04:12,270 --> 01:04:13,330
Stu:
Shall we bag the flay?

975
01:04:14,850 --> 01:04:18,130
FX:
You know that feeling when a guy you like sends you a text at two o'clock on

976
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FX:
a Tuesday night asking if he can come and find you?

977
01:04:22,910 --> 01:04:30,410
FX:
And then you open the door to him like you've always forgotten he's coming over. Oh. Hi. Hey.

978
01:04:34,650 --> 01:04:37,350
FX:
Oh my God, definitely not. That does nothing for you.

979
01:04:37,950 --> 01:04:41,150
FX:
What? These are my clothes, boo. I've been wearing these all day.

980
01:04:41,410 --> 01:04:43,470
FX:
It's really not that bad, it's really not that bad. Oh, what are you doing?

981
01:04:43,790 --> 01:04:47,490
FX:
You got them all by the balls, cause I'm waterfalls.

982
01:04:47,770 --> 01:04:51,050
FX:
How did you meet? She used to be our godmother. But then their parents split

983
01:04:51,050 --> 01:04:55,110
FX:
up. Mum died. You really are very good looking.

984
01:04:55,650 --> 01:04:58,750
FX:
Thank you. Very. Thank you. Very.

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01:04:59,810 --> 01:05:03,510
FX:
Thank you. It's been really nice to spend the day with a normal family.

986
01:05:06,330 --> 01:05:10,770
FX:
The only thing harder than having to tell your super high-powered perfect anorexic

987
01:05:10,770 --> 01:05:14,750
FX:
rich super sister that you've run out of money is having to ask her to bail you out,

988
01:05:17,430 --> 01:05:20,910
FX:
i'm just gonna ask her it's gonna come do you need to borrow money no.

989
01:05:22,770 --> 01:05:28,390
Mel:
Fleabag yeah so essentially if we've got uh high fidelity establishing its conceit

990
01:05:28,390 --> 01:05:32,250
Mel:
and abbott elementary having fun and playing with its conceit this is the episode

991
01:05:32,250 --> 01:05:38,630
Mel:
where fleabag Fleabag smashes its conceit looks into the fourth wall and breaks it with a hammer.

992
01:05:38,910 --> 01:05:40,770
Chas:
Oh, I think it breaks her.

993
01:05:41,230 --> 01:05:44,650
Stu:
We probably need to remind people of where we're at if they haven't watched

994
01:05:44,650 --> 01:05:48,770
Stu:
the show. And if they have watched the show, this is a little bit spoilerific.

995
01:05:49,010 --> 01:05:52,970
Stu:
But I mean, watching this again, I was like, man, Fleabag really is one of the

996
01:05:52,970 --> 01:05:55,010
Stu:
best written shows I have seen.

997
01:05:55,170 --> 01:05:57,650
Stu:
Like every line is so good. So, yeah.

998
01:05:58,190 --> 01:06:01,870
Stu:
I do. How do we even begin to summarize it? Cause it's really,

999
01:06:01,950 --> 01:06:06,590
Stu:
what's interesting is season one was based on her stage show and season two was not right.

1000
01:06:06,850 --> 01:06:10,950
Stu:
And so season one, our point of view character is Fleabag.

1001
01:06:11,050 --> 01:06:13,590
Stu:
And in a way it's a little bit of high fidelity because it's like the story

1002
01:06:13,590 --> 01:06:16,990
Stu:
of her broken relationships, but her broken relationships are also with her

1003
01:06:16,990 --> 01:06:20,350
Stu:
sister and her father, her father, her mom's died and she's,

1004
01:06:20,350 --> 01:06:24,170
Stu:
and he's her father has remarried her gone mother and all those things are broken relationships.

1005
01:06:24,170 --> 01:06:30,670
Stu:
And then there's basically a past storyline around Boo, her best friend, that has died.

1006
01:06:30,810 --> 01:06:37,370
Stu:
And what we learn in season one is that Fleabag had an affair with Boo's boyfriend.

1007
01:06:38,850 --> 01:06:41,050
Stu:
And that led-

1008
01:06:41,050 --> 01:06:42,570
Chas:
To Boo having a traffic accident.

1009
01:06:42,930 --> 01:06:46,570
Stu:
Yes. It's not suicide. Yes. Boo ends up kind of- They even have an argument,

1010
01:06:46,630 --> 01:06:48,770
Stu:
don't they? And then it leads it into it. I'm not sure exactly.

1011
01:06:48,890 --> 01:06:52,050
Stu:
But ultimately, the point is Fleabag feels responsible for Boo's death.

1012
01:06:52,150 --> 01:06:58,110
Stu:
That's season one. Season 2 is structured around the impending wedding of Fleabag's

1013
01:06:58,110 --> 01:07:01,450
Stu:
godmother to Fleabag's father And in the process of that meeting,

1014
01:07:01,570 --> 01:07:05,930
Stu:
they're going to get married by this sexy priest Played by Andrew Scott Do.

1015
01:07:05,930 --> 01:07:09,550
Excerpts:
You prefer weddings or funerals? Weddings His arms I think there's something

1016
01:07:09,550 --> 01:07:10,990
Excerpts:
humbling about funerals Really?

1017
01:07:11,350 --> 01:07:16,490
Excerpts:
Yeah, it's good to dwell on the next life You really think there's a next life? What do you believe?

1018
01:07:16,930 --> 01:07:20,870
Excerpts:
Worm food Why? Why what?

1019
01:07:21,110 --> 01:07:25,370
Excerpts:
His neck Why would you believe in something awful, when you can believe in something wonderful?

1020
01:07:26,010 --> 01:07:28,450
Excerpts:
Don't make me an optimist, you will ruin my life.

1021
01:07:30,310 --> 01:07:36,470
Excerpts:
Have you been to many funerals? A couple. His neck. And you never felt them go somewhere?

1022
01:07:36,750 --> 01:07:39,390
Excerpts:
No, they were already gone. His beautiful neck. What?

1023
01:07:42,330 --> 01:07:47,930
Excerpts:
You just said his beautiful neck. No, I said that they were already gone.

1024
01:07:49,010 --> 01:07:50,370
Excerpts:
Okay. Weird.

1025
01:07:51,430 --> 01:07:52,330
Mel:
His neck.

1026
01:07:53,090 --> 01:07:53,910
Stu:
His neck.

1027
01:07:53,950 --> 01:07:54,830
Chas:
His beautiful neck.

1028
01:07:55,050 --> 01:07:57,070
Mel:
His beautiful neck. His arms.

1029
01:07:57,330 --> 01:08:01,150
Stu:
His beautiful everything. Andrew Scott. And, like, that's important.

1030
01:08:01,350 --> 01:08:03,370
Stu:
But there's also a little bit of a B-plot, which is Fleabag.

1031
01:08:03,490 --> 01:08:10,130
Stu:
Her sister had a miscarriage, and Fleabag lied to protect her sister and say

1032
01:08:10,130 --> 01:08:11,850
Stu:
that the miscarriage was her own.

1033
01:08:11,850 --> 01:08:14,890
Stu:
Right so that's kind of the past thing we're in the middle

1034
01:08:14,890 --> 01:08:17,830
Stu:
episode we're talking about episode four so we're smack bang in the

1035
01:08:17,830 --> 01:08:20,450
Stu:
middle of season two which is kind of

1036
01:08:20,450 --> 01:08:23,150
Stu:
where we're coming in where her relationship with the priest is

1037
01:08:23,150 --> 01:08:26,130
Stu:
a little bit more cemented they're very flirty they're clearly

1038
01:08:26,130 --> 01:08:28,750
Stu:
into each other but we're also going to be

1039
01:08:28,750 --> 01:08:31,590
Stu:
getting something about the past like boo comes back into this

1040
01:08:31,590 --> 01:08:34,370
Stu:
so i'll say my thesis is what is interesting about this

1041
01:08:34,370 --> 01:08:37,510
Stu:
show and i've been i've been saying it throughout this episode but

1042
01:08:37,510 --> 01:08:40,370
Stu:
i think what is interesting in that fleabag is

1043
01:08:40,370 --> 01:08:43,190
Stu:
ultimately having what i would kind of call intrusive thoughts this is

1044
01:08:43,190 --> 01:08:45,990
Stu:
her internal dialogue but she's having these moments like

1045
01:08:45,990 --> 01:08:49,270
Stu:
the joke about the neck where she just can't keep on commenting on

1046
01:08:49,270 --> 01:08:53,950
Stu:
his neck she can't help herself from having these kinds of thoughts and her

1047
01:08:53,950 --> 01:08:59,870
Stu:
impulsiveness is actually what gets her in trouble anyway and this voiceover

1048
01:08:59,870 --> 01:09:04,590
Stu:
builds to the fact that a the priest sees what she's doing right which is a

1049
01:09:04,590 --> 01:09:06,870
Stu:
bit of a moment but there's a whole sequence of flashbacks in the

1050
01:09:06,950 --> 01:09:09,830
Stu:
middle and the flashbacks are built into it where we see these

1051
01:09:09,830 --> 01:09:13,890
Stu:
little moments moments moments moments and then we go into a bit of a retelling

1052
01:09:13,890 --> 01:09:18,370
Stu:
of the funeral of fleabag's mother and that there is no fourth wall breaking

1053
01:09:18,370 --> 01:09:22,690
Stu:
in that flashback because the fourth wall break is actually it's kind of like

1054
01:09:22,690 --> 01:09:27,710
Stu:
not a fourth wall break it's that the the flashback itself is intruded upon fleabag.

1055
01:09:28,440 --> 01:09:32,680
Chas:
So, let's share with the audience, our audience, hello audience,

1056
01:09:32,920 --> 01:09:36,440
Chas:
why this episode in particular out of all of Fleabag.

1057
01:09:36,500 --> 01:09:39,840
Chas:
Because we could have just done the opening episode of Fleabag and that would

1058
01:09:39,840 --> 01:09:46,440
Chas:
be probably have replaced High Fidelity as a wonderful example of fourth wall

1059
01:09:46,440 --> 01:09:50,580
Chas:
breaking. It is one character talking directly to us.

1060
01:09:50,660 --> 01:09:55,000
Chas:
It's nearly always in the moment that she's talking to us.

1061
01:09:55,060 --> 01:09:59,900
Chas:
Her moments where she breaks the fourth wall is always usually commenting on

1062
01:09:59,900 --> 01:10:01,320
Chas:
what is happening at that moment.

1063
01:10:01,440 --> 01:10:07,100
Chas:
She's usually telling us that she's lying or sometimes just looking at us to make us laugh.

1064
01:10:07,340 --> 01:10:15,120
Chas:
She's involving us in her perspective of the world around us and letting us

1065
01:10:15,120 --> 01:10:17,180
Chas:
in on the jokes that she sees.

1066
01:10:17,320 --> 01:10:23,100
Chas:
And it's so incredibly funny. But I think the reason we wanted to do this episode

1067
01:10:23,100 --> 01:10:29,880
Chas:
in particular is where her asides start to intrude on her life.

1068
01:10:29,940 --> 01:10:35,340
Chas:
They're not separate from what is going on with the other characters.

1069
01:10:35,640 --> 01:10:39,920
Chas:
And I had thought it was one moment, but it's actually three moments.

1070
01:10:40,380 --> 01:10:48,000
Mel:
It's three, and I'm going to argue that it's four. Okay. And possibly five. So. All right.

1071
01:10:48,020 --> 01:10:51,380
Chas:
Should we start talking through these moments? Because I feel like the reason

1072
01:10:51,380 --> 01:10:55,660
Chas:
why we're picking this episode is because it does what High Fidelity does.

1073
01:10:55,920 --> 01:10:59,080
Chas:
And then it, like you said, Mel, it smashes it.

1074
01:10:59,120 --> 01:11:05,020
Chas:
It just uses it to, to me, it profoundly changed my relationship with Fleabag.

1075
01:11:05,120 --> 01:11:11,740
Chas:
So it had a profound narrative effect from the Phoebe Waller-Bridge intends

1076
01:11:11,740 --> 01:11:17,220
Chas:
as the writer and showrunner and performer that is separate.

1077
01:11:17,340 --> 01:11:20,840
Chas:
It's not what Fleabag intends. Fleabag does not want.

1078
01:11:21,640 --> 01:11:24,840
Chas:
What is happening to her relationship with us.

1079
01:11:24,840 --> 01:11:27,960
Mel:
Well uh so this episode actually it's

1080
01:11:27,960 --> 01:11:30,800
Mel:
fascinating it starts the exact same way that abbott elementary

1081
01:11:30,800 --> 01:11:33,620
Mel:
starts which is fleabag kind of giving a sideways smirk to

1082
01:11:33,620 --> 01:11:36,740
Mel:
the camera and then for the for the first bit

1083
01:11:36,740 --> 01:11:40,420
Mel:
of it it follows on exactly as all the rest of the episodes to this point have

1084
01:11:40,420 --> 01:11:47,240
Mel:
have followed on um until the main smash that we get uh which is hot priest

1085
01:11:47,240 --> 01:11:55,900
Mel:
and it does have some lead up so fleabag and hot priest are in the cafe and they're talking and so.

1086
01:11:55,900 --> 01:12:02,840
Excerpts:
You run do you run this place on your own no i opened it with a friend oh cool

1087
01:12:02,840 --> 01:12:08,100
Excerpts:
right so you No, she... she, er... She what?

1088
01:12:12,260 --> 01:12:18,320
Excerpts:
What? What? She... she what? She...

1089
01:12:20,940 --> 01:12:24,460
Excerpts:
He's a bit annoying, actually. What is that? What?

1090
01:12:25,240 --> 01:12:28,540
Excerpts:
That thing that you're doing. It's like you disappear. What?

1091
01:12:28,620 --> 01:12:29,480
Excerpts:
What are you not telling me?

1092
01:12:29,960 --> 01:12:32,080
Excerpts:
Nothing. Tell me what's going on. I don't need to hear it. Nothing.

1093
01:12:32,100 --> 01:12:34,020
Excerpts:
Tell me. Come on. No. No, you told me. Nothing.

1094
01:12:34,520 --> 01:12:38,580
Excerpts:
Nothing. Stop being so churchy. I'm not being churchy. I'm just trying to get

1095
01:12:38,580 --> 01:12:39,580
Excerpts:
to know you. I don't want that.

1096
01:12:41,180 --> 01:12:44,980
Stu:
Before that, she comments on his neck to us.

1097
01:12:45,000 --> 01:12:45,200
Mel:
Yeah.

1098
01:12:45,280 --> 01:12:48,300
Stu:
And he's like, what did you say? He doesn't acknowledge the camera,

1099
01:12:48,440 --> 01:12:52,760
Stu:
but he acknowledges that he has heard what she has said to us.

1100
01:12:52,840 --> 01:12:56,060
Stu:
And so that's confrontational because we're like, oh, when she speaks to camera,

1101
01:12:56,260 --> 01:12:57,780
Stu:
are the people hearing it?

1102
01:12:58,160 --> 01:13:02,860
Mel:
I actually think, though, and I want to jump back. I think that this had set

1103
01:13:02,860 --> 01:13:07,200
Mel:
up in the episode prior that follows through because in the episode prior,

1104
01:13:07,420 --> 01:13:12,460
Mel:
they're in the rectory talking and a painting falls off the wall.

1105
01:13:12,520 --> 01:13:15,860
Mel:
She says something about, I don't believe in God and a painting falls off the wall.

1106
01:13:16,240 --> 01:13:20,560
Mel:
And the priest says, oh, I love when he does that. So we're getting something as a response,

1107
01:13:20,720 --> 01:13:24,760
Mel:
which that has a follow up in this episode as well,

1108
01:13:24,920 --> 01:13:29,280
Mel:
where at the very end where another huge painting then falls,

1109
01:13:29,380 --> 01:13:34,120
Mel:
which tying those together makes me think that the first setup is actually episode

1110
01:13:34,120 --> 01:13:36,960
Mel:
prior when the painting falls off the wall. You might not think anything of

1111
01:13:36,960 --> 01:13:38,120
Mel:
it because it's just a moment.

1112
01:13:38,260 --> 01:13:40,580
Mel:
And then you get the hot priest going, who are you talking to?

1113
01:13:41,200 --> 01:13:44,860
Mel:
So these are like cracks in the fourth wall that are sort of appearing.

1114
01:13:44,940 --> 01:13:47,080
Mel:
You've got a small crack. You've got a bigger crack.

1115
01:13:47,380 --> 01:13:52,580
Mel:
And then she goes, what? Nothing. She's very confused. And then he turns and he barrels.

1116
01:13:53,180 --> 01:13:57,220
Mel:
He's like, who? What? And he's barreling, but like clearly searching,

1117
01:13:57,340 --> 01:13:59,320
Mel:
like his eyes are sort of going back and forth and his head is searching.

1118
01:13:59,620 --> 01:14:04,280
Mel:
And you just see this complete look of utter shock on her face because it's

1119
01:14:04,280 --> 01:14:07,320
Mel:
clear that this is not just the only time someone else has looked at,

1120
01:14:07,360 --> 01:14:10,800
Mel:
quote unquote, us, the audience, Beryl, but this is a new thing for her.

1121
01:14:11,080 --> 01:14:13,640
Mel:
It's not like, oh, this has happened before, we just haven't seen it.

1122
01:14:13,680 --> 01:14:15,960
Mel:
This is completely new for her.

1123
01:14:16,360 --> 01:14:19,720
Mel:
That hot priest is breaking that and is speaking...

1124
01:14:20,200 --> 01:14:24,960
Mel:
Essentially to us even though he's not 100 sure what's going on.

1125
01:14:24,960 --> 01:14:27,940
Stu:
I will challenge that because in that cafe scene and

1126
01:14:27,940 --> 01:14:32,320
Stu:
it was emma pointed this out so she as as i mentioned talking about uh high

1127
01:14:32,320 --> 01:14:36,720
Stu:
fidelity the camera in fleabag is a little bit more like fleabag looking to

1128
01:14:36,720 --> 01:14:40,300
Stu:
the corner or something that's slightly out of place but she when she barrels

1129
01:14:40,300 --> 01:14:44,180
Stu:
the camera so there's a shot when she looks directly down at the camera and

1130
01:14:44,180 --> 01:14:46,960
Stu:
it's andrew scott that turns over his shoulder and goes what What are you looking at?

1131
01:14:47,060 --> 01:14:52,940
Stu:
And then we kind of cut to an angle that's basically 90 degrees from that. It's a right angle.

1132
01:14:53,040 --> 01:14:57,120
Stu:
And we see him glance at the spot where the camera just was.

1133
01:14:57,320 --> 01:15:01,820
Stu:
So I don't think that moment is to indicate that he isn't thinking of it as a camera.

1134
01:15:01,980 --> 01:15:06,380
Stu:
He's just noticing that she is looking somewhere in the distance. The where do you go?

1135
01:15:06,440 --> 01:15:07,540
Mel:
Where did you go? Yep.

1136
01:15:07,580 --> 01:15:12,480
Stu:
She is looking somewhere at the distance and speaking sometimes aloud and sometimes speaking not.

1137
01:15:12,660 --> 01:15:16,340
Stu:
Yeah. Right. I think there's a deliberate ambiguity there about whether or not

1138
01:15:16,340 --> 01:15:20,940
Stu:
she's talking it or thinking it, but she is clearly doing a stew and kind of

1139
01:15:20,940 --> 01:15:22,580
Stu:
wandering off and staring into the distance.

1140
01:15:22,760 --> 01:15:24,880
Chas:
But they do it twice in that cafe moment.

1141
01:15:25,180 --> 01:15:26,380
Mel:
Yeah, it's twice in the cafe.

1142
01:15:26,820 --> 01:15:31,140
Chas:
So there's one moment, Sue, that you've just talked about where she looks away,

1143
01:15:31,400 --> 01:15:34,680
Chas:
he follows his gaze, the camera cuts to a different angle, but then there's

1144
01:15:34,680 --> 01:15:38,540
Chas:
a follow-up to that where she does it again and she looks straight down and

1145
01:15:38,540 --> 01:15:41,760
Chas:
he follows her gaze and looks down the barrel at us.

1146
01:15:41,760 --> 01:15:46,120
Chas:
And he's not looking at us because he doesn't see what she's seeing.

1147
01:15:46,460 --> 01:15:50,700
Chas:
The filmmakers made a choice in a visual escalation.

1148
01:15:51,280 --> 01:15:51,760
Stu:
Yeah.

1149
01:15:51,980 --> 01:15:57,940
Chas:
That the first one is him looking where she's looking and going, what's going on there?

1150
01:15:58,060 --> 01:16:02,960
Chas:
And the second one feels even more violent and even more intrusive because he looks at us.

1151
01:16:03,200 --> 01:16:03,820
Stu:
Yeah, great.

1152
01:16:04,000 --> 01:16:07,020
Mel:
Yeah. And I think if we look at them as the second and third,

1153
01:16:07,160 --> 01:16:10,080
Mel:
and the first one is when they're walking outside on the street,

1154
01:16:10,140 --> 01:16:14,240
Mel:
the first one could be written off as, you know, sometimes we think we're talking

1155
01:16:14,240 --> 01:16:16,200
Mel:
to ourselves or like, oh, did I say that out loud?

1156
01:16:16,300 --> 01:16:20,220
Mel:
So the first one, and then the second one escalates and the third escalates really hard.

1157
01:16:20,780 --> 01:16:24,940
Mel:
Though I also, I have a question. I talked about the painting,

1158
01:16:25,060 --> 01:16:28,040
Mel:
which happens, there's a painting that happens in the episode prior and then

1159
01:16:28,040 --> 01:16:32,180
Mel:
at the very end of this episode, which definitely also feels like a fourth wall break.

1160
01:16:32,380 --> 01:16:35,580
Mel:
And I don't, obviously this is an audio medium, so I can't really,

1161
01:16:35,700 --> 01:16:38,760
Mel:
but there is a, in a flashback there's a

1162
01:16:38,760 --> 01:16:42,700
Mel:
flashback where i think that boo

1163
01:16:42,700 --> 01:16:46,260
Mel:
barrels the camera and it's just a look it's

1164
01:16:46,260 --> 01:16:51,360
Mel:
in a shot and it's really interesting because nothing comes of it and boo is

1165
01:16:51,360 --> 01:16:56,940
Mel:
alone in the frame and it's one of those things where it's a wide enough shot

1166
01:16:56,940 --> 01:17:01,540
Mel:
and it's a short enough moment and also sometimes if you watch things every

1167
01:17:01,540 --> 01:17:04,400
Mel:
once in a while you'll watch something where especially if

1168
01:17:04,480 --> 01:17:07,340
Mel:
you're working with kids or especially if the camera's moving,

1169
01:17:07,500 --> 01:17:11,460
Mel:
sometimes actors will glance across the barrel of the frame.

1170
01:17:11,580 --> 01:17:15,780
Mel:
But I think it's, I think especially the fact that it appears in this episode that.

1171
01:17:16,800 --> 01:17:22,100
Mel:
Feels very intentional. It does actually feel to me like Boo is the only other

1172
01:17:22,100 --> 01:17:29,600
Mel:
person who truly saw, even every once in a while, what Fleabag saw before Hot Priest.

1173
01:17:30,480 --> 01:17:33,540
Mel:
And it's just, it's a visual cue. It's a brief moment.

1174
01:17:34,020 --> 01:17:38,620
Mel:
And it could be written off, but I think the fact that it was chosen to be left

1175
01:17:38,620 --> 01:17:40,580
Mel:
in here, I think is very telling.

1176
01:17:40,820 --> 01:17:43,560
Chas:
I want to ask you guys a question and I want

1177
01:17:43,560 --> 01:17:46,440
Chas:
to lead on from so we just had the the cafe

1178
01:17:46,440 --> 01:17:49,100
Chas:
moments and there was a

1179
01:17:49,100 --> 01:17:52,020
Chas:
moment that i saw in this rewatch through this

1180
01:17:52,020 --> 01:17:55,460
Chas:
lens that i don't think i really paid much attention to so

1181
01:17:55,460 --> 01:18:02,100
Chas:
the priest leaves and then fleabag is walking just down a a nondescript suburban

1182
01:18:02,100 --> 01:18:09,720
Chas:
london street and she looks behind her at the camera and then picks up her pace

1183
01:18:09,720 --> 01:18:12,500
Chas:
and the camera stays still and she disappears peers around a corner.

1184
01:18:13,000 --> 01:18:19,460
Chas:
And I'm suddenly felt like I'm being run away from. She feels threatened by me.

1185
01:18:20,020 --> 01:18:26,980
Chas:
And Sue, you've talked about how in the flashbacks to her mom's funeral,

1186
01:18:27,040 --> 01:18:31,280
Chas:
and it's really the only time across the two seasons where we've really dug

1187
01:18:31,280 --> 01:18:32,480
Chas:
into her relationship with her mom.

1188
01:18:32,540 --> 01:18:36,260
Chas:
Like you said, the first season was more about Fleabag coming to terms with

1189
01:18:36,260 --> 01:18:38,560
Chas:
her feelings of responsibility for Boo.

1190
01:18:38,880 --> 01:18:45,340
Chas:
And that flashback is prompted to my mind from the priest interrogating her

1191
01:18:45,340 --> 01:18:47,060
Chas:
relationship with us, noticing it.

1192
01:18:47,280 --> 01:18:54,080
Chas:
So, what did it feel like to you guys when suddenly her relationship to us has always been playful,

1193
01:18:54,340 --> 01:18:58,660
Chas:
it's kept us involved in this narrative, it's made us feel like we know more

1194
01:18:58,660 --> 01:19:05,080
Chas:
than anyone else, we're in on the joke, and then suddenly she's feeling I.

1195
01:19:05,080 --> 01:19:10,180
Stu:
Feel like it's her losing control, right? And I think the camera following up

1196
01:19:10,180 --> 01:19:13,020
Stu:
behind is that we thought she had control over the narrative.

1197
01:19:13,180 --> 01:19:13,740
Chas:
Right?

1198
01:19:13,860 --> 01:19:16,220
Stu:
In terms of the way it's presented, the way she's telling it.

1199
01:19:16,280 --> 01:19:19,800
Stu:
We understand characters through how she sees them, right?

1200
01:19:19,920 --> 01:19:22,280
Stu:
And she explains them to us, right?

1201
01:19:22,460 --> 01:19:25,040
Stu:
I don't think we really like Fleabag's point of view at all.

1202
01:19:25,140 --> 01:19:28,160
Stu:
And that moment when he recognizes that the camera's there, we're like,

1203
01:19:28,300 --> 01:19:30,560
Stu:
oh, maybe she doesn't have as much control at all.

1204
01:19:30,640 --> 01:19:31,880
Stu:
And that moment where it's basically

1205
01:19:31,880 --> 01:19:34,820
Stu:
stalking her. It feels like something out of a horror film, right?

1206
01:19:35,040 --> 01:19:38,920
Stu:
The kind of handheld POV shot in her, quicking pace, glancing over her shoulder

1207
01:19:38,920 --> 01:19:41,680
Stu:
and stuff like that, makes it feel kind of intrusive.

1208
01:19:41,700 --> 01:19:46,180
Stu:
And that's when it does have these kind of flash cuts to the flashback that

1209
01:19:46,180 --> 01:19:47,560
Stu:
are somewhat intrusive.

1210
01:19:47,620 --> 01:19:55,380
Stu:
It reminded me of a Yoko Ono experimental film from the 60s called Rape,

1211
01:19:55,480 --> 01:19:59,500
Stu:
where it's a camera just following a woman for like 70 minutes.

1212
01:19:59,520 --> 01:20:02,440
Stu:
I haven't watched the whole 70 minutes because it's not an easy watch.

1213
01:20:04,110 --> 01:20:08,550
Stu:
It's effectively just a stalker. So I'm feeling that she's lost control and

1214
01:20:08,550 --> 01:20:10,710
Stu:
that she is a little bit more powerless.

1215
01:20:12,090 --> 01:20:17,830
Mel:
I took the opposite point of view. Not that she's lost control,

1216
01:20:17,930 --> 01:20:24,530
Mel:
but that she has actually managed to run away for a moment from her intrusive thoughts.

1217
01:20:24,730 --> 01:20:31,330
Mel:
And this, I think for me, it's almost a paired scene with the end in the confessional.

1218
01:20:31,330 --> 01:20:35,530
Mel:
When she enters the confessional, she does not break the fourth wall once.

1219
01:20:36,210 --> 01:20:37,030
Excerpts:
Keep going.

1220
01:20:39,570 --> 01:20:45,790
Excerpts:
I've stolen things. I've had a lot of sex outside marriage.

1221
01:20:47,710 --> 01:20:53,650
Excerpts:
And once or twice inside someone else's. There's been a spot of sodomy.

1222
01:20:55,430 --> 01:21:00,030
Excerpts:
There's been much masturbation, a bit of violence, and of course the endless fucking blasphemy.

1223
01:21:02,150 --> 01:21:02,830
Excerpts:
And?

1224
01:21:05,030 --> 01:21:05,710
Excerpts:
And?

1225
01:21:08,690 --> 01:21:11,370
Excerpts:
Go on. And...

1226
01:21:14,970 --> 01:21:15,650
Excerpts:
I...

1227
01:21:19,430 --> 01:21:23,490
Excerpts:
I can't... It's okay, go on.

1228
01:21:25,590 --> 01:21:30,490
Excerpts:
Frightened. Of what? Forgetting things.

1229
01:21:32,630 --> 01:21:35,510
Excerpts:
People. Forgetting people.

1230
01:21:40,870 --> 01:21:45,930
Excerpts:
And I'm ashamed of not knowing what I'm... What you want?

1231
01:21:46,010 --> 01:21:48,150
Excerpts:
It's okay not to know what you want. No, I know what I want.

1232
01:21:48,230 --> 01:21:49,350
Excerpts:
I know exactly what I want.

1233
01:21:49,810 --> 01:21:51,810
Excerpts:
Right now. What's that?

1234
01:21:55,410 --> 01:21:58,310
Excerpts:
It's bad. It's okay.

1235
01:22:01,330 --> 01:22:03,250
Excerpts:
I want someone to tell me what to wear in the morning.

1236
01:22:05,410 --> 01:22:08,510
Excerpts:
OK, well, I think there are people who can... No, I want someone to tell me

1237
01:22:08,510 --> 01:22:09,850
Excerpts:
what to wear every morning.

1238
01:22:11,770 --> 01:22:16,730
Excerpts:
I want someone to tell me what to eat, what to like, what to hate,

1239
01:22:16,830 --> 01:22:21,910
Excerpts:
what to rage about, what to listen to, what band to like, what to buy tickets

1240
01:22:21,910 --> 01:22:24,570
Excerpts:
for, what to joke about, what not to joke about.

1241
01:22:24,650 --> 01:22:31,130
Excerpts:
I want someone to tell me what to believe in, who to vote for and who to love and how to tell them.

1242
01:22:37,780 --> 01:22:43,240
Excerpts:
I just think I want someone to tell me how to live my life, Father,

1243
01:22:43,240 --> 01:22:45,080
Excerpts:
because so far I think I've been getting it wrong.

1244
01:22:47,040 --> 01:22:49,780
Excerpts:
But I know that's why people want people like you in their lives,

1245
01:22:50,300 --> 01:22:52,120
Excerpts:
because you just tell them how to do it.

1246
01:22:52,580 --> 01:22:56,900
Excerpts:
You just tell them what to do and what they'll get out at the end of it.

1247
01:22:56,920 --> 01:23:00,300
Excerpts:
Even though I don't believe your bullshit, and I know that scientifically nothing

1248
01:23:00,300 --> 01:23:05,220
Excerpts:
that I do makes any difference in the end anyway, I'm still scared. Why am I still scared?

1249
01:23:05,220 --> 01:23:07,980
Mel:
She never breaks fourth wall

1250
01:23:07,980 --> 01:23:10,580
Mel:
she's and it's a several minute scene if i

1251
01:23:10,580 --> 01:23:13,820
Mel:
recall correctly she never breaks the fourth wall she's avoiding

1252
01:23:13,820 --> 01:23:17,980
Mel:
us she's avoiding her thoughts she's completely consumed with her concentrating

1253
01:23:17,980 --> 01:23:23,660
Mel:
on the priest and i think that whether for better or for worse both of these

1254
01:23:23,660 --> 01:23:32,220
Mel:
instances are her managing to get away from her intrusive thoughts at least for a

1255
01:23:32,300 --> 01:23:35,140
Mel:
moment it's something that she doesn't want to have to

1256
01:23:35,140 --> 01:23:38,100
Mel:
think about so she runs away from it and manages to

1257
01:23:38,100 --> 01:23:40,760
Mel:
not think about it and it's in the confessional it's

1258
01:23:40,760 --> 01:23:45,260
Mel:
something she wants to say okay you know what i want this thing and if i let

1259
01:23:45,260 --> 01:23:50,540
Mel:
this conscience or if i look at it or think about it for a moment i'm going

1260
01:23:50,540 --> 01:23:57,340
Mel:
to lose my nerve or i'm going to uh lose the feeling the everything that I want

1261
01:23:57,340 --> 01:23:58,680
Mel:
to be getting from this moment.

1262
01:23:58,920 --> 01:24:03,280
Mel:
And so I think that those moments are almost paired to me.

1263
01:24:03,320 --> 01:24:07,820
Mel:
The function is different, but the effect is quite similar in terms of like,

1264
01:24:07,860 --> 01:24:13,100
Mel:
I'm actually just ignoring this right now, which it's interesting, right?

1265
01:24:13,180 --> 01:24:18,460
Mel:
The control is, is it good if we just like push away our thoughts and I can't hear you.

1266
01:24:18,880 --> 01:24:23,060
Mel:
So the terminology is quite fluid. Maybe some would say, well,

1267
01:24:23,080 --> 01:24:27,520
Mel:
she has lost control, even if she's not thinking about it. the ability to think

1268
01:24:27,520 --> 01:24:29,580
Mel:
about it and face it is control.

1269
01:24:29,860 --> 01:24:33,620
Mel:
But I think that both of them are certainly showing that.

1270
01:24:34,300 --> 01:24:37,560
Mel:
Facing it or not is what she's in control of at the moment well.

1271
01:24:37,560 --> 01:24:42,080
Chas:
You guys both are using the term intrusive thoughts and i i love that because

1272
01:24:42,080 --> 01:24:47,520
Chas:
that word inherently suggests not her control they are intruding they're not

1273
01:24:47,520 --> 01:24:49,440
Chas:
invited or prompted by but.

1274
01:24:49,440 --> 01:24:54,060
Mel:
If she's not eyeballing them right if she's not looking them slash us in the eye.

1275
01:24:54,060 --> 01:24:58,820
Chas:
I i agree with your analysis about what it means when we are not having the

1276
01:24:58,820 --> 01:25:03,420
Chas:
asides when she's not breaking the fourth wall that it's showing her i guess more present.

1277
01:25:03,840 --> 01:25:09,600
Chas:
But in the first season, it felt like she was very much in control of whenever

1278
01:25:09,600 --> 01:25:14,000
Chas:
she wanted to look at us and what she wanted us to know and not know.

1279
01:25:14,260 --> 01:25:16,220
Chas:
You're talking about control of the narrative.

1280
01:25:16,840 --> 01:25:21,960
Chas:
So, not only is she the step up from high fidelity,

1281
01:25:22,120 --> 01:25:24,980
Chas:
you know, on the spectrum where high fidelity is a seven, what makes Fleabag

1282
01:25:24,980 --> 01:25:27,360
Chas:
higher up that spectrum is to your point,

1283
01:25:27,420 --> 01:25:30,600
Chas:
Stu, you she's placing the camera she's placing us

1284
01:25:30,600 --> 01:25:33,740
Chas:
and it will often switch very quickly

1285
01:25:33,740 --> 01:25:36,660
Chas:
she always knows where we are she's putting us where she wants us

1286
01:25:36,660 --> 01:25:39,680
Chas:
to be whereas i feel that

1287
01:25:39,680 --> 01:25:42,660
Chas:
with rob in high fidelity the camera

1288
01:25:42,660 --> 01:25:45,580
Chas:
where we are located when she talks to us doesn't move

1289
01:25:45,580 --> 01:25:48,540
Chas:
very much and she doesn't appear to be placing us

1290
01:25:48,540 --> 01:25:52,620
Chas:
with the same amount of precision um and

1291
01:25:52,620 --> 01:25:59,680
Chas:
so here it just feels like she's losing control of it the thing that made me

1292
01:25:59,680 --> 01:26:03,700
Chas:
really gasp when I watched this episode for the first time when I when I first

1293
01:26:03,700 --> 01:26:09,640
Chas:
saw it is if the hot priest can see it everyone else can see it and no one's noticed,

1294
01:26:10,580 --> 01:26:16,820
Chas:
And if the hot priest can see her and she's just disappearing into her mind

1295
01:26:16,820 --> 01:26:20,820
Chas:
or whatever, I suddenly felt, oh my God, am I Fleabag's mental illness?

1296
01:26:21,620 --> 01:26:23,620
Chas:
What my experience was.

1297
01:26:23,880 --> 01:26:28,120
Mel:
That feels like three very large questions piled on top of each other wearing a trench coat.

1298
01:26:28,320 --> 01:26:30,560
Stu:
You're my mental illness, if that makes you feel any better.

1299
01:26:31,540 --> 01:26:36,080
Mel:
I am Stu's mental illness. I think there's a difference, right,

1300
01:26:36,140 --> 01:26:38,920
Mel:
between seeing and understanding.

1301
01:26:38,920 --> 01:26:43,260
Mel:
So if you're saying that the hot priest doing this proves that everyone else

1302
01:26:43,260 --> 01:26:47,780
Mel:
sees it and just shrugs it off then i do think there's either it's because they

1303
01:26:47,780 --> 01:26:53,200
Mel:
don't quote unquote see fleabag they don't understand her or they don't have

1304
01:26:53,200 --> 01:26:57,760
Mel:
intrusive thoughts and they sort of write off the fact that she does well.

1305
01:26:57,760 --> 01:27:01,700
Chas:
He doesn't understand it he keeps asking where are you going what what are you.

1306
01:27:01,700 --> 01:27:04,340
Mel:
But But he's trying to understand.

1307
01:27:04,620 --> 01:27:05,140
Chas:
Right? Yes, yeah.

1308
01:27:05,140 --> 01:27:10,380
Mel:
As opposed to, and I'll argue that by the finale, he does.

1309
01:27:10,740 --> 01:27:14,080
Chas:
Yeah, absolutely. And, you know. So I watched this last night and Anna and I

1310
01:27:14,080 --> 01:27:20,460
Chas:
went on a bit of a YouTube rabbit hole afterwards and saw Phoebe Waller-Bridge's opening from SNL.

1311
01:27:21,480 --> 01:27:25,720
Excerpts:
Fleabag came from a very personal place for me. It began as a way to get Andrew

1312
01:27:25,720 --> 01:27:28,060
Excerpts:
Scott to dress up as a priest and tell me that he loves me.

1313
01:27:29,320 --> 01:27:33,120
Excerpts:
It took me six years and two seasons to achieve it, but I did it.

1314
01:27:37,700 --> 01:27:40,900
Excerpts:
Yeah, I don't care about awards. I just want gay men to love me.

1315
01:27:41,980 --> 01:27:46,500
Excerpts:
I called the character Priest in the script, but everyone started calling him Hot Priest.

1316
01:27:47,340 --> 01:27:52,060
Excerpts:
Obviously, Andrew is hot, but this priest character caused such a hornstorm.

1317
01:27:53,160 --> 01:27:57,640
Excerpts:
Andrew and I were trying to figure out what it was about him that was driving women so mental.

1318
01:27:58,280 --> 01:28:03,620
Excerpts:
And we boiled it down and realized it was because he was doing this one thing.

1319
01:28:05,400 --> 01:28:06,040
Excerpts:
Listening.

1320
01:28:11,440 --> 01:28:15,560
Mel:
Yep, he listens. He tries to understand. He knows what she wants.

1321
01:28:15,680 --> 01:28:18,180
Mel:
I mean, and then he tells her to kneel. So, you know, there's that.

1322
01:28:18,320 --> 01:28:24,960
Mel:
But yeah, absolutely. He listens in a way that nobody else in her life other than Boo has done.

1323
01:28:25,240 --> 01:28:29,460
Chas:
Yeah. Which goes to your point that if the, whether or not Boo barreling is

1324
01:28:29,460 --> 01:28:34,380
Chas:
intentional or not, But if it was, it speaks to that, that she was the only

1325
01:28:34,380 --> 01:28:38,080
Chas:
other person who may see Fleabag communing with us.

1326
01:28:38,360 --> 01:28:42,300
Stu:
Boo's all flashback. I haven't rewatched the first season, but we only ever

1327
01:28:42,300 --> 01:28:44,580
Stu:
see Blue in Fleabag's memory.

1328
01:28:44,740 --> 01:28:49,520
Stu:
So it feels like, yeah, it's a representation of their closeness.

1329
01:28:49,900 --> 01:28:52,440
Stu:
Yeah. So I agree with that. It's just I don't think it's Boo.

1330
01:28:52,680 --> 01:28:56,080
Stu:
If we were somehow there was a prequel series, Fleabag is zero.

1331
01:28:56,480 --> 01:28:58,940
Stu:
I'm not sure Boo would be looking at the camera.

1332
01:28:58,940 --> 01:29:03,620
Mel:
But I think I think the idea is that whether it's in her memory or not,

1333
01:29:03,680 --> 01:29:08,480
Mel:
or whether the fact that like Fleabag still clearly had some mental issues and was haunted by guilt.

1334
01:29:08,560 --> 01:29:10,260
Mel:
The flashback that we get to Boo

1335
01:29:10,260 --> 01:29:13,440
Mel:
is while Fleabag is sleeping with her boyfriend and Boo doesn't know it.

1336
01:29:13,580 --> 01:29:14,060
Chas:
Right.

1337
01:29:14,440 --> 01:29:17,620
Mel:
And Fleabag is haunted by guilt for what she's done.

1338
01:29:17,700 --> 01:29:21,460
Mel:
And Boo did understand her. So even if the idea is that it's still,

1339
01:29:21,560 --> 01:29:27,560
Mel:
you know, Fleabag's impression of Boo, understanding her and knowing her intrusive

1340
01:29:27,560 --> 01:29:31,100
Mel:
thoughts about like, I'm cheating on you with your boyfriend.

1341
01:29:31,240 --> 01:29:33,400
Mel:
You're like, why would I do this? I'm a terrible person.

1342
01:29:33,560 --> 01:29:37,920
Mel:
I think that's still representative of that. And in some similar ways,

1343
01:29:38,040 --> 01:29:42,920
Mel:
I think some people would argue, I'm not sure I would, that the painting falling,

1344
01:29:43,040 --> 01:29:46,720
Mel:
for example, is God breaking the fourth wall to the priest.

1345
01:30:00,360 --> 01:30:01,680
Mel:
Ways to tweak it with the painting and with Boo breaking it even in Mm-hmm.

1346
01:30:01,990 --> 01:30:05,470
Chas:
So, Stu, you've made the observation, I'm not sure if you've made it in this

1347
01:30:05,470 --> 01:30:11,670
Chas:
recording, that Fleabag only talks to us when she wants something of us.

1348
01:30:12,190 --> 01:30:18,850
Chas:
And there's one final moment in this episode where we've come out of the flashback.

1349
01:30:18,850 --> 01:30:23,630
Chas:
It does a really impressive match cut of Fleabag sitting on her parents' bed

1350
01:30:23,630 --> 01:30:28,730
Chas:
in sunlight to Fleabag sitting in a church pew at night.

1351
01:30:28,910 --> 01:30:35,010
Chas:
And Fleabag looks at us just before she kneels down to pray.

1352
01:30:35,330 --> 01:30:38,750
Chas:
And I'm wondering, what do you guys...

1353
01:30:39,430 --> 01:30:40,550
Stu:
How do we interpret that moment?

1354
01:30:40,750 --> 01:30:40,990
Chas:
Yes.

1355
01:30:41,430 --> 01:30:42,790
Stu:
Look at me, I'm about to pray.

1356
01:30:43,030 --> 01:30:48,690
Mel:
Mm-hmm. Mm-hmm. The episode also ends with Fleabag looking at us and not saying anything.

1357
01:30:49,010 --> 01:30:49,510
Stu:
Mm-hmm.

1358
01:30:49,630 --> 01:30:51,190
Mel:
If they're her intrusive thoughts,

1359
01:30:51,530 --> 01:30:55,730
Mel:
I think that it's asking not just for understanding, but for forgiveness.

1360
01:30:56,290 --> 01:31:00,790
Mel:
And I've also seen the argument that the fourth wall break is her talking to

1361
01:31:00,790 --> 01:31:05,690
Mel:
Boo, you know, the way that some people talk to loved ones who have passed,

1362
01:31:05,930 --> 01:31:06,970
Mel:
you know, whether you go to the

1363
01:31:06,970 --> 01:31:10,130
Mel:
gravesite or whether you talk out loud or whether you do it in your head.

1364
01:31:10,230 --> 01:31:14,630
Mel:
And that's not a theory that I fully subscribe to. I do think it's interesting,

1365
01:31:14,770 --> 01:31:16,230
Mel:
but I don't subscribe to it.

1366
01:31:16,270 --> 01:31:22,330
Mel:
But I do think that if she will never be able to get forgiveness from Boo,

1367
01:31:22,610 --> 01:31:26,090
Mel:
and she's attempting to be able to forgive herself.

1368
01:31:26,730 --> 01:31:31,230
Mel:
And I think whether it's intrusive thoughts, whether you think that there is,

1369
01:31:31,330 --> 01:31:37,250
Mel:
you know, some unknown unseen audience that she understands is there the same

1370
01:31:37,250 --> 01:31:40,610
Mel:
way that, you know, sometimes people write autobiographies or, or whatnot.

1371
01:31:40,790 --> 01:31:44,230
Mel:
I think that she's looking for forgiveness.

1372
01:31:45,190 --> 01:31:49,730
Stu:
I think that I'm going to build off that because you're right.

1373
01:31:49,790 --> 01:31:53,190
Stu:
That I've said, not just about fleabag, but that all the episodes,

1374
01:31:53,250 --> 01:31:54,950
Stu:
the characters talk to the audience when they want something.

1375
01:31:55,050 --> 01:31:59,230
Stu:
I think that is affected by how much control they have over that telling.

1376
01:31:59,350 --> 01:32:03,630
Stu:
And I think what is interesting about what the characters say in the

1377
01:32:04,070 --> 01:32:07,510
Stu:
Abbott Elementary reflects the fact that they know they are talking to the camera.

1378
01:32:07,570 --> 01:32:10,330
Stu:
They know they're talking to a documentary crew that is going to inform how

1379
01:32:10,330 --> 01:32:13,850
Stu:
they say and how they want to present themselves. There's a consciousness to it.

1380
01:32:14,310 --> 01:32:17,530
Stu:
Similarly, High Fidelity is there is a consciousness of what she is saying,

1381
01:32:17,590 --> 01:32:22,150
Stu:
even if it is an internal narrator that she has control over the story that she is being told.

1382
01:32:23,010 --> 01:32:26,150
Stu:
Fleabag is interesting because I think early on, she definitely wants us to

1383
01:32:26,150 --> 01:32:28,290
Stu:
think better of her, right?

1384
01:32:28,290 --> 01:32:33,650
Stu:
But then if we come to this realization that part of her intrusive thoughts,

1385
01:32:33,790 --> 01:32:38,730
Stu:
to use the term that we've been using, comes from trauma, one that she's a character

1386
01:32:38,730 --> 01:32:42,790
Stu:
that's impulsive, but then that has created a situation of trauma that she's wanting forgiveness.

1387
01:32:43,110 --> 01:32:48,370
Stu:
Then what she wants from the audience isn't anywhere near as conscious of what

1388
01:32:48,370 --> 01:32:52,850
Stu:
the other characters in the other films and shows that we've looked at,

1389
01:32:52,930 --> 01:32:54,210
Stu:
including the voiceover episodes.

1390
01:32:54,210 --> 01:32:57,450
Stu:
Episodes right she is acting just as impulsively

1391
01:32:57,450 --> 01:33:00,950
Stu:
and that reflects more of a deeper you know

1392
01:33:00,950 --> 01:33:04,390
Stu:
to use the terminology it's a need not a want right so

1393
01:33:04,390 --> 01:33:08,330
Stu:
she's got a need for forgiveness and part of like even her commenting on like

1394
01:33:08,330 --> 01:33:12,230
Stu:
look at his arms about the priest at the beginning look at his neck is about

1395
01:33:12,230 --> 01:33:19,290
Stu:
like forgive me he is really hot you know i can't help myself can i right he's

1396
01:33:19,290 --> 01:33:21,430
Stu:
kind of that's That's a need, not a conscious want.

1397
01:33:21,610 --> 01:33:24,470
Stu:
So I think, you know, when characters speak when they want something is also

1398
01:33:24,470 --> 01:33:25,930
Stu:
characters speak when they need something.

1399
01:33:26,150 --> 01:33:28,730
Stu:
I mean, it's such a weird dictaming, you know, need versus want.

1400
01:33:28,850 --> 01:33:31,890
Stu:
I like it because you can basically inject it with your own shit.

1401
01:33:33,290 --> 01:33:37,130
Stu:
She isn't pursuing a conscious agenda in the same way that I think Jack in Fight Club is.

1402
01:33:37,510 --> 01:33:40,730
Stu:
Right. I think it's a more subconscious agenda. gender and that's

1403
01:33:40,730 --> 01:33:44,750
Stu:
reflected by her control and this moment in particular where she's kind of beginning

1404
01:33:44,750 --> 01:33:48,750
Stu:
to lose control makes us reflect and changes particularly for the final sequences

1405
01:33:48,750 --> 01:33:53,070
Stu:
what we think of her and then how we kind of portray that and look the fact

1406
01:33:53,070 --> 01:33:56,450
Stu:
that she's kind of impulsive and speaks her mind to the audience is kind of

1407
01:33:56,450 --> 01:33:58,970
Stu:
what makes her humor like fun and transgressive right.

1408
01:33:59,790 --> 01:34:05,650
Chas:
All right. A couple of questions. I agree that her asides are impulsive and

1409
01:34:05,650 --> 01:34:10,010
Chas:
a reflection of intrusive thoughts, but I don't think we are her.

1410
01:34:10,250 --> 01:34:15,330
Chas:
I feel that she's performative and she's sharing them with someone outside herself.

1411
01:34:15,570 --> 01:34:18,370
Chas:
I don't think it's Deadpool level where she knows she's in a TV show,

1412
01:34:18,510 --> 01:34:23,830
Chas:
but the fact that she places us at different physical locations around the room

1413
01:34:23,830 --> 01:34:29,230
Chas:
so that she has to physically turn to look at us makes me, I don't know.

1414
01:34:29,450 --> 01:34:32,810
Mel:
I do think she wants an external forgiveness.

1415
01:34:33,030 --> 01:34:38,210
Mel:
She's trying to forgive herself, but I think she believes she can't do it without someone.

1416
01:34:38,290 --> 01:34:42,230
Mel:
And I think that it is a slightly more ethereal someone.

1417
01:34:43,250 --> 01:34:48,290
Mel:
Yeah, I don't believe she knows, oh, I'm in a TV show and I'm asking the audience.

1418
01:34:48,290 --> 01:34:54,050
Mel:
But I do think that there is some metatextual sleight of hand that's going on

1419
01:34:54,050 --> 01:34:58,730
Mel:
there of us being representative of her desperately seeking other people in

1420
01:34:58,730 --> 01:35:00,150
Mel:
her life to validate her.

1421
01:35:00,790 --> 01:35:04,450
Chas:
Yeah. And that moment where she looks at us before she gets down to pray,

1422
01:35:04,590 --> 01:35:08,950
Chas:
I felt very strongly that she was asking for us not to judge her because she's

1423
01:35:08,950 --> 01:35:14,510
Chas:
like an atheist and, you know, has been playing, you know, back and forth about

1424
01:35:14,510 --> 01:35:17,370
Chas:
religion and stuff with a hot priest for three episodes.

1425
01:35:17,370 --> 01:35:21,110
Chas:
And, you know, suddenly feeling compelled to pray.

1426
01:35:21,370 --> 01:35:24,630
Chas:
And she looks at us asking something of us.

1427
01:35:25,370 --> 01:35:28,490
Stu:
Yeah. I mean, I think it has a different effect.

1428
01:35:28,850 --> 01:35:33,470
Stu:
I mean, who is the audience in the staged version of this?

1429
01:35:33,790 --> 01:35:37,870
Stu:
And you've seen it, Mel, but we've seen soliloquies in shows before,

1430
01:35:38,050 --> 01:35:40,330
Stu:
right? There's a long history of soliloquy.

1431
01:35:41,330 --> 01:35:42,910
Stu:
Are they talking to the audience?

1432
01:35:43,450 --> 01:35:48,010
Mel:
Yeah. And in that, it's much more of a, let me tell you this story that happened.

1433
01:35:48,390 --> 01:35:53,490
Mel:
And she doesn't say, you, the hundred audience people assembled here tonight.

1434
01:35:53,490 --> 01:35:57,350
Mel:
But it feels very much like, oh, I'm at a party and I'm telling a story.

1435
01:35:57,610 --> 01:36:00,950
Mel:
And let me tell you this story. Oh, my God, you won't believe.

1436
01:36:00,950 --> 01:36:05,490
Mel:
You know, some people in a stage play, even if it's a one person show,

1437
01:36:05,630 --> 01:36:07,770
Mel:
they're talking, you know, to the back wall.

1438
01:36:07,850 --> 01:36:15,010
Mel:
She's looking at the audience members as she talks in a lot of the scenes. So it's more of a.

1439
01:36:15,990 --> 01:36:19,090
Mel:
Stand-up type of presentation than some.

1440
01:36:19,090 --> 01:36:19,830
Chas:
One person.

1441
01:36:19,830 --> 01:36:21,170
Mel:
Plays are for sure.

1442
01:36:21,170 --> 01:36:24,850
Chas:
There's a really excellent analysis that it's

1443
01:36:24,850 --> 01:36:27,810
Chas:
only a 10 minute youtube video of someone doing a compare

1444
01:36:27,810 --> 01:36:32,370
Chas:
and contrast between the stage show and various moments from season one and

1445
01:36:32,370 --> 01:36:35,450
Chas:
some of them are just she's obviously done that stage show for years and got

1446
01:36:35,450 --> 01:36:41,190
Chas:
great success and the delivery is identical and it's fascinating but he made

1447
01:36:41,190 --> 01:36:46,550
Chas:
the observation that just like what you said that because fleabag is narrating what is happening,

1448
01:36:46,770 --> 01:36:49,430
Chas:
then has the gags as its commentary.

1449
01:36:49,870 --> 01:36:55,650
Chas:
It's like she's telling everyone a story. Whereas when we're seeing the action

1450
01:36:55,650 --> 01:37:02,370
Chas:
and she's only talking to us directly in these asides, then it's a very different

1451
01:37:02,370 --> 01:37:04,370
Chas:
feeling about when the audience is involved.

1452
01:37:04,710 --> 01:37:07,990
Chas:
The audience of the stage shows up is involved a hundred percent of the time

1453
01:37:07,990 --> 01:37:11,690
Chas:
because she's telling us a story and she's aware that she's telling us a story.

1454
01:37:11,690 --> 01:37:14,590
Stu:
It's also told in hindsight, by nature of it.

1455
01:37:14,670 --> 01:37:18,970
Stu:
We're watching Fleabag on stage as this character telling this story from that

1456
01:37:18,970 --> 01:37:23,350
Stu:
point in time backwards, whereas on the show, they're very much more in the moment.

1457
01:37:23,450 --> 01:37:27,770
Stu:
And that actually is more similar to high fidelity and that kind of like,

1458
01:37:27,810 --> 01:37:31,770
Stu:
I'm writing a book at the moment. Like, I am in the emotional present.

1459
01:37:31,970 --> 01:37:34,870
Stu:
So, it's a shift of that kind of emotional presence, which is a really cool

1460
01:37:34,870 --> 01:37:36,590
Stu:
term. We should use it more often.

1461
01:37:37,350 --> 01:37:42,130
Chas:
Yeah. And I do think, you know, leading, hopefully segwaying somewhat into our

1462
01:37:42,130 --> 01:37:45,070
Chas:
key learnings is that I feel that

1463
01:37:45,070 --> 01:37:51,050
Chas:
breaking the fourth wall is a much more emotional tool than voiceover.

1464
01:37:51,090 --> 01:37:54,190
Chas:
Like that to me is the big distinction that I've seen.

1465
01:37:54,350 --> 01:37:59,210
Chas:
I think voiceover has a wider array of uses that it could be applied to.

1466
01:37:59,290 --> 01:38:02,750
Chas:
Like we particularly identified from when in time the voiceover is coming can

1467
01:38:02,750 --> 01:38:05,590
Chas:
have like a huge impact narratively.

1468
01:38:06,750 --> 01:38:10,750
Chas:
But in this, it's always about bringing us deeply inside.

1469
01:38:10,890 --> 01:38:14,630
Chas:
Like, Stu, you and I, we've often talked about, like, our major challenge in

1470
01:38:14,630 --> 01:38:20,550
Chas:
film and television is dramatizing the internal, externalizing the internal.

1471
01:38:20,810 --> 01:38:26,130
Chas:
And that's what breaking the fourth wall, at least in these three examples, clearly is.

1472
01:38:27,190 --> 01:38:29,150
Stu:
So, why do people not do it more?

1473
01:38:29,410 --> 01:38:35,710
Mel:
I think it can be seen as a narrative cheat. I think we don't always want the

1474
01:38:35,710 --> 01:38:38,830
Mel:
audience to know everything the narrator does.

1475
01:38:38,870 --> 01:38:44,490
Mel:
I think it can be hard to write and certainly to deliver in a way that makes sense.

1476
01:38:44,790 --> 01:38:48,610
Mel:
I think there's a lot of reasons not to as well as reasons to.

1477
01:38:48,870 --> 01:38:51,490
Chas:
Like not knowing what's going on in people's heads. Yes.

1478
01:38:52,140 --> 01:38:57,260
Chas:
Creates mystery, creates drama, creates questions. And I don't think these,

1479
01:38:57,380 --> 01:39:02,320
Chas:
in all three of these, it's not trying to hide what the characters are feeling.

1480
01:39:02,380 --> 01:39:03,440
Chas:
It's doing quite the opposite.

1481
01:39:03,540 --> 01:39:08,540
Chas:
It really wants us to be involved in the character's emotional state.

1482
01:39:08,760 --> 01:39:13,920
Stu:
But there's an irony in particularly Fleabag and High Fidelity.

1483
01:39:14,160 --> 01:39:18,060
Stu:
Mockumentary is slightly different. An irony between what they're expressing

1484
01:39:18,060 --> 01:39:21,120
Stu:
about their emotions and what they're feeling, right?

1485
01:39:21,120 --> 01:39:27,360
Stu:
And even High Fidelity has a degree of irony between her thinking that she's

1486
01:39:27,360 --> 01:39:30,000
Stu:
a dick and what she's actually doing in these few moments. I'm like,

1487
01:39:30,040 --> 01:39:31,080
Stu:
you're putting up healthy boundaries.

1488
01:39:31,520 --> 01:39:36,120
Stu:
You've just been socialized to think that you need, you know, in a particular way.

1489
01:39:36,240 --> 01:39:39,860
Stu:
I don't know if that's where it ends up going, but that's what I kind of felt in these few moments.

1490
01:39:40,280 --> 01:39:43,480
Stu:
Like, oh, I'm such a dick for ghosting him in the bar. And I'm like,

1491
01:39:43,520 --> 01:39:45,100
Stu:
well, if you feel unsafe, do it.

1492
01:39:46,100 --> 01:39:48,920
Stu:
I'm kind of interested in that kind of irony. And so, it feels like if you've

1493
01:39:48,920 --> 01:39:53,580
Stu:
got a kind of very emotional irony, Breaking the Fourth Wall would be a good

1494
01:39:53,580 --> 01:39:57,820
Stu:
choice to do it as opposed to voiceover, which I do think we talked about.

1495
01:39:57,920 --> 01:40:02,220
Stu:
We never did it, but we talked about the Thin Red Line, you know, or Tree of Life.

1496
01:40:02,620 --> 01:40:07,620
Stu:
Those voiceovers are incredibly emotional and reflective, but they're not about

1497
01:40:07,620 --> 01:40:10,620
Stu:
the emotional present. I just use the word reflective.

1498
01:40:10,880 --> 01:40:14,780
Stu:
And I don't think Fleabag's voiceover is that reflective.

1499
01:40:15,980 --> 01:40:20,000
Stu:
Right, you may make grand statements about his sister or godmother or whatever,

1500
01:40:20,200 --> 01:40:24,880
Stu:
but it's not like, inside man is a war, a war against nature.

1501
01:40:25,480 --> 01:40:29,860
Chas:
It is, like these particular episodes in the second season of Fleabag,

1502
01:40:29,920 --> 01:40:35,760
Chas:
it is about revealing to us that she has been lying to herself.

1503
01:40:35,880 --> 01:40:40,000
Chas:
Those intrusive thoughts are a defense mechanism that gets broken down.

1504
01:40:40,680 --> 01:40:44,780
Chas:
It's like, if I can make fun of the world, I am safer.

1505
01:40:45,180 --> 01:40:50,540
Chas:
And Hot Priest, by listening to her, breaks down her barriers and she is,

1506
01:40:50,620 --> 01:40:53,840
Chas:
you know, deeply hurt and it uncovers that.

1507
01:40:54,260 --> 01:40:59,780
Stu:
All right. So, what are our top five takeaways from this episode?

1508
01:41:00,420 --> 01:41:03,720
Mel:
We each get five. I'm just- Oh, I love a list.

1509
01:41:03,900 --> 01:41:04,640
Chas:
It's high fidelity.

1510
01:41:06,760 --> 01:41:08,200
Stu:
You're like, that's number one.

1511
01:41:08,620 --> 01:41:11,480
Mel:
Takeaways. Number one, I can break the fourth wall.

1512
01:41:11,980 --> 01:41:19,920
Mel:
I think I really like the idea that not every moment has to fit what the world rules are.

1513
01:41:19,940 --> 01:41:22,860
Mel:
You can have tiny, cheeky little things like the moment with Boo,

1514
01:41:23,020 --> 01:41:27,140
Mel:
the moment in High Fidelity with the music's diegetic, you know,

1515
01:41:27,140 --> 01:41:30,160
Mel:
the moment where the student breaks the fourth wall in Abbott Elementary,

1516
01:41:30,380 --> 01:41:31,920
Mel:
which doesn't really happen very often.

1517
01:41:31,920 --> 01:41:37,560
Mel:
You can still have a little bit more formal, as in form, fun with something

1518
01:41:37,560 --> 01:41:42,920
Mel:
like this than you can in a sort of otherwise strict sitcom setup. So that would be one.

1519
01:41:43,720 --> 01:41:48,800
Mel:
I think two, anytime you could get Andrew Scott to, you know,

1520
01:41:48,820 --> 01:41:52,000
Mel:
star in your thing, that's probably great. You should take advantage of that.

1521
01:41:53,300 --> 01:41:57,880
Mel:
Three, I think like you don't always have to be clear enough.

1522
01:41:58,290 --> 01:42:02,090
Mel:
About it, right? You don't have to, the painting falling from the wall may or

1523
01:42:02,090 --> 01:42:05,090
Mel:
may not be God, may or may not be talking to us, may or may not be talking to

1524
01:42:05,090 --> 01:42:09,010
Mel:
hot priest, may or may not be talking to, we were saying, who is Fleabag talking

1525
01:42:09,010 --> 01:42:12,210
Mel:
to? We don't necessarily know. That's fine. You don't need to.

1526
01:42:12,490 --> 01:42:17,290
Mel:
You don't need to spell every last thing out when you break the fourth wall.

1527
01:42:17,370 --> 01:42:21,470
Mel:
Like with some other things, it's much clearer who's being talked to.

1528
01:42:21,810 --> 01:42:27,290
Mel:
I also really liked the fact that But Fleabag in particular uses a lot of J-cuts.

1529
01:42:27,510 --> 01:42:31,170
Mel:
Once it's established, it's breaking the fourth wall.

1530
01:42:31,230 --> 01:42:35,410
Mel:
Sometimes you think there is, and then actually you realize it sounds like a

1531
01:42:35,410 --> 01:42:36,690
Mel:
voiceover, and then it's not.

1532
01:42:36,830 --> 01:42:39,630
Mel:
And it allows you to play with that formally a little bit more.

1533
01:42:39,690 --> 01:42:42,790
Stu:
For those who don't know, a J-cut means sound starts, and then we cut to the

1534
01:42:42,790 --> 01:42:47,590
Stu:
picture, which the sound belongs to. It's a J because it's sound, then the line.

1535
01:42:47,590 --> 01:42:51,130
Mel:
Is- You hear me talking, even though you're looking at a visual of a cute cat.

1536
01:42:51,130 --> 01:42:54,990
Mel:
And then it cuts to me looking at the cute cat while in the middle of my sentence.

1537
01:42:55,430 --> 01:43:00,290
Mel:
And I think playing with that formally in a place where you're breaking the

1538
01:43:00,290 --> 01:43:03,230
Mel:
fourth wall means sometimes you don't know, am I being talked to?

1539
01:43:03,290 --> 01:43:04,810
Mel:
Is a third person being talked to?

1540
01:43:05,010 --> 01:43:08,810
Mel:
Who's being talked to here? So it creates a little bit more fun of that.

1541
01:43:08,810 --> 01:43:13,090
Mel:
And I think as well, the idea of control is really fascinating.

1542
01:43:14,030 --> 01:43:20,410
Mel:
So that five for me is when we're talking about how much control does the person

1543
01:43:20,410 --> 01:43:22,090
Mel:
speaking have over their narrative?

1544
01:43:22,130 --> 01:43:27,350
Mel:
And where is that lever in terms of that was was a really great takeaway between

1545
01:43:27,350 --> 01:43:32,510
Mel:
all of these and Fight Club and, and sometimes even every once in a while,

1546
01:43:32,630 --> 01:43:36,430
Mel:
like you're slamming the lever one way in one episode, and you know,

1547
01:43:36,430 --> 01:43:38,790
Mel:
back up to 11 in the next episode.

1548
01:43:38,810 --> 01:43:44,450
Chas:
I think that last one answers your question, Stu, as to why don't we break the fourth wall more often.

1549
01:43:44,650 --> 01:43:48,350
Chas:
We don't want, for the most part, in most stories, we don't want our characters

1550
01:43:48,350 --> 01:43:52,550
Chas:
in charge of the narrative. We want an element of the narrative happening to them.

1551
01:43:53,180 --> 01:43:56,620
Stu:
Which is a little bit different, because I would say soliloquy is far more common

1552
01:43:56,620 --> 01:44:00,920
Stu:
in theatre. Even modern theatre seems to have a win.

1553
01:44:01,280 --> 01:44:04,020
Stu:
I mean, maybe it's just because, you know, they're, quote unquote,

1554
01:44:04,140 --> 01:44:06,400
Stu:
breaking a leg, to actually use the source of the terminology.

1555
01:44:06,520 --> 01:44:07,940
Stu:
You know, there's always part

1556
01:44:07,940 --> 01:44:11,980
Stu:
of the performance is projecting a performance for an audience, right?

1557
01:44:12,140 --> 01:44:14,820
Stu:
Yeah. I mean, not always. I mean, there are people that have far more experience

1558
01:44:14,820 --> 01:44:17,880
Stu:
in theatre than me, such as yourself, and then there are going to be people

1559
01:44:17,880 --> 01:44:20,800
Stu:
that are even more experienced than you in terms of theatre and go,

1560
01:44:20,880 --> 01:44:23,180
Stu:
well, no, in modern theatre and blah, blah, blah, and Brechtian,

1561
01:44:23,180 --> 01:44:26,600
Stu:
whatever styles that you don't really address. But you know what I mean.

1562
01:44:27,200 --> 01:44:30,520
Stu:
I would say most theater and I've done immersive theater where you walk around

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Stu:
in an environment and the actors are performing the scenes meters from you and

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01:44:33,660 --> 01:44:37,580
Stu:
you can kind of walk around there is a degree of kind of immersive theater that

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01:44:37,580 --> 01:44:43,060
Stu:
still is aware that it's performing for an audience that I think isn't necessarily

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01:44:43,060 --> 01:44:45,540
Stu:
an inherent part of the medium of cinema I.

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01:44:45,540 --> 01:44:49,920
Chas:
Think I've spoken about this in in a different episode but one of the most powerful

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01:44:49,920 --> 01:44:53,360
Chas:
theatrical experiences I've ever had was in,

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01:44:53,560 --> 01:44:56,380
Chas:
there's an official, you know, proper professional production,

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01:44:56,560 --> 01:45:00,460
Chas:
but friends of mine staged it and it was a three-hander, but they deliberately

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01:45:00,460 --> 01:45:04,760
Chas:
put the stage between two sets of tiered seating in the audience.

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01:45:04,940 --> 01:45:08,520
Chas:
So, the audience is constantly, we're watching the show.

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01:45:09,520 --> 01:45:13,560
Chas:
On the other side of the show is audience. So, it was constantly reminding us

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01:45:13,560 --> 01:45:16,560
Chas:
that we're watching a show in that Brechtian thing, but it was- it made us feel

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01:45:16,560 --> 01:45:18,920
Chas:
like the show was very transgressive as well.

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01:45:19,040 --> 01:45:22,220
Chas:
It was a retelling of a- as one of the Greek players. So, lots of,

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01:45:22,240 --> 01:45:24,880
Chas:
you know, eating each other's children and whatnot.

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01:45:26,020 --> 01:45:31,220
Chas:
So, it made you feel even more uncomfortable than just watching something that

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01:45:31,220 --> 01:45:34,200
Chas:
makes you feel uncomfortable is watching something that makes you feel uncomfortable

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01:45:34,200 --> 01:45:39,360
Chas:
and knowing that you're in turn being watched having that experience so i i

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01:45:39,360 --> 01:45:43,520
Chas:
think that to me answers the question as to why we don't break the fourth wall

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01:45:43,520 --> 01:45:45,820
Chas:
all the time yeah because.

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01:45:45,820 --> 01:45:50,000
Stu:
It's harder to do in such a way that it's like how do they not have the control

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01:45:50,000 --> 01:45:54,260
Stu:
of this it'd be interesting and maybe people can list as examples of films or

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01:45:54,260 --> 01:45:57,720
Stu:
shows where multiple characters have pieces to camera that are not.

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01:45:57,720 --> 01:45:59,340
Chas:
In documentaries the examples.

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01:45:59,340 --> 01:46:03,420
Stu:
I'm reaching to with characters that can talk directly to the audience,

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01:46:03,700 --> 01:46:05,540
Stu:
they're all found footage.

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01:46:05,740 --> 01:46:10,120
Stu:
In a broad sense, I know found footage is more narrow now, but I actually,

1590
01:46:10,240 --> 01:46:13,000
Stu:
for me, found footage should actually be defined more.

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01:46:13,260 --> 01:46:19,160
Stu:
I mean, it's the found part that people react to, but, you know, mockumentary, I guess.

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01:46:19,840 --> 01:46:24,520
Stu:
So, do you have a top five, Chas, takeaways from this episode or any other episodes?

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01:46:26,160 --> 01:46:31,640
Chas:
Top five. I learned early on in this episode that those levers that I thought

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01:46:31,640 --> 01:46:34,420
Chas:
it were all locked at one end are still very relevant.

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01:46:34,520 --> 01:46:38,080
Chas:
I think all of these are incredibly consistent with who the audience is.

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01:46:38,180 --> 01:46:42,480
Chas:
Mel, you said they don't spell it out. They don't. We have no idea who Phoebe

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01:46:42,480 --> 01:46:49,680
Chas:
Waller-Bridge thinks or knows Fleabag is talking to, but it is incredibly consistent.

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01:46:49,960 --> 01:46:54,760
Chas:
I think establishing that relationship, like who Rob in High Fidelity is talking to,

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01:46:54,840 --> 01:46:59,180
Chas:
how the characters in Abbott react differently, depending whether they're talking

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01:46:59,180 --> 01:47:04,000
Chas:
to who us as a mockumentary audience or the camera crew or each other,

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01:47:04,060 --> 01:47:05,940
Chas:
whether they know they're being surveilled or not,

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01:47:06,440 --> 01:47:09,500
Chas:
like who they're talking to is very important.

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01:47:09,960 --> 01:47:13,640
Chas:
The lesson, you know, it wasn't so much from this episode, but rather your guys'

1604
01:47:13,760 --> 01:47:15,280
Chas:
last episode on Fight Club.

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01:47:15,620 --> 01:47:18,820
Chas:
How much control of the narrative are you giving to the character?

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01:47:19,000 --> 01:47:24,820
Chas:
And it was nice to see how much the differences between Fleabag and High Fidelity

1607
01:47:24,820 --> 01:47:29,020
Chas:
are directorial and visual as much as anything else.

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01:47:29,480 --> 01:47:32,440
Chas:
Uh, portraying the differences in, in who is control of the narrative.

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01:47:32,760 --> 01:47:36,520
Chas:
Um, and finally the big one, like you said, Sue, not to steal your,

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01:47:36,580 --> 01:47:40,120
Chas:
your observation, but the, the big difference between breaking the fourth wall

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01:47:40,120 --> 01:47:41,340
Chas:
on other things is just that.

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01:47:42,090 --> 01:47:45,490
Chas:
Emotional present that there's not

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01:47:45,490 --> 01:47:48,450
Chas:
really a better tool for clearly communicating the

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01:47:48,450 --> 01:47:51,570
Chas:
emotional present of a character and

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01:47:51,570 --> 01:47:54,490
Chas:
i mean i think again why does it not happen more

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01:47:54,490 --> 01:47:57,230
Chas:
often you know we we look at portrait of

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01:47:57,230 --> 01:48:01,010
Chas:
a lady on fire and that ending where they're looking at each other across the

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01:48:01,010 --> 01:48:06,870
Chas:
theater and i would much rather just be watching them in silence knowing what

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01:48:06,870 --> 01:48:11,390
Chas:
they're thinking rather than actually hearing one or other of them talking to

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01:48:11,390 --> 01:48:15,490
Chas:
us about the turmoil of their emotions. So they are different experiences.

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01:48:16,030 --> 01:48:21,090
Stu:
Yeah. Like, do you ever not stop talking? Like, that would be your feeling in

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01:48:21,090 --> 01:48:23,250
Stu:
that moment. You start to become irritated by the character.

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01:48:23,390 --> 01:48:28,470
Stu:
And the fact that Fleabag is slightly annoying is kind of part of the reason

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01:48:28,470 --> 01:48:32,410
Stu:
that she- One, the episodes are only half an hour.

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01:48:33,070 --> 01:48:38,130
Chas:
Rob's annoying as well. Yeah. Rob knows that they're annoying. Yeah.

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01:48:38,550 --> 01:48:44,050
Stu:
Okay. So my top five takeaways for this episode, let's see if I can get to five.

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01:48:44,370 --> 01:48:49,190
Stu:
One is obviously the control of the narrative ended up proving a really useful

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01:48:49,190 --> 01:48:53,630
Stu:
tool, but the way that then that relates to how the character speaks,

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01:48:53,830 --> 01:48:57,650
Stu:
that's kind of two observation two that I think is really useful.

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01:48:57,710 --> 01:49:03,390
Stu:
This idea that on the want versus need spectrum, the awareness that the character

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01:49:03,390 --> 01:49:08,950
Stu:
says of what they're saying is affected by how much control they have over the narrative, right?

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01:49:09,030 --> 01:49:12,450
Stu:
The more control over the narrative, the more that they're kind of speaking

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01:49:12,450 --> 01:49:13,710
Stu:
with at least a surface agenda.

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01:49:13,870 --> 01:49:17,510
Stu:
There may be a quote-unquote subtext to that, but whereas I think the less control

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01:49:17,510 --> 01:49:21,050
Stu:
they have, the more it's kind of reflective of their inner desire, maybe?

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01:49:21,430 --> 01:49:24,190
Stu:
I'm not articulating that particularly well, I'm sorry. So, three.

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01:49:24,430 --> 01:49:32,470
Stu:
The relationship, I suppose, four, between presence and the present is kind of really interesting.

1638
01:49:32,650 --> 01:49:36,070
Stu:
I think it's actually kind of a fun pun, emotional presence versus emotional

1639
01:49:36,070 --> 01:49:38,970
Stu:
present might be an idea that's worth unpacking.

1640
01:49:39,810 --> 01:49:42,550
Stu:
Five, let me, I had it, I had it, I should have written it down.

1641
01:49:43,620 --> 01:49:43,900
Stu:
Nope.

1642
01:49:44,740 --> 01:49:48,060
Mel:
I've got, I've got a six. I'll give you your fifth is that I'm quite curious

1643
01:49:48,060 --> 01:49:54,660
Mel:
to see some of these scripts and how they write when the switch or does it say

1644
01:49:54,660 --> 01:50:00,120
Mel:
fleabag barrels or does it talk about Rob's headphones being diegetic and that sort of thing?

1645
01:50:00,180 --> 01:50:03,020
Mel:
I think especially again, when I was talking about like stuff like the J cut

1646
01:50:03,020 --> 01:50:06,820
Mel:
stuff, like the diegetic stuff about Boo, which I hadn't really noted before.

1647
01:50:06,900 --> 01:50:10,260
Mel:
Now, I'm really curious now to go back to those scripts and see some of these

1648
01:50:10,260 --> 01:50:12,260
Mel:
really specific moments, how they were written.

1649
01:50:12,260 --> 01:50:16,160
Stu:
Yeah i mean you'd think for a screenwriting podcast we would have actually looked

1650
01:50:16,160 --> 01:50:20,080
Stu:
at the screenwriting oh well not all.

1651
01:50:20,080 --> 01:50:23,640
Mel:
The scripts are available i'm pretty sure i tried to find that high fidelity script and.

1652
01:50:23,640 --> 01:50:24,460
Stu:
Maybe this wasn't.

1653
01:50:24,460 --> 01:50:28,000
Mel:
Looking in the right place but a lot of tv scripts aren't available unless they've

1654
01:50:28,000 --> 01:50:28,980
Mel:
been submitted for emmys.

1655
01:50:28,980 --> 01:50:33,920
Stu:
Yep yep and i think the fleabag one that he's floating around is season two

1656
01:50:33,920 --> 01:50:38,240
Stu:
episode one that you actually otherwise have to buy the scriptures which i have

1657
01:50:38,240 --> 01:50:42,320
Stu:
had on my christmas list for like three years and it still Who hasn't gotten it for Christmas.

1658
01:50:42,520 --> 01:50:43,700
Mel:
This might be the year.

1659
01:50:43,960 --> 01:50:46,780
Chas:
Hopefully Emma will listen to that.

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01:50:47,920 --> 01:50:53,740
Chas:
Thanks as always to our amazing patrons who bring you more Draft Zero more often.

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01:50:53,860 --> 01:50:58,580
Chas:
In particular, Alexandra, Jen, Jesse, Laurie, Crob, Lily, Millay,

1662
01:50:58,740 --> 01:51:02,960
Chas:
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1663
01:51:03,800 --> 01:51:07,380
Chas:
And thanks to you both for holding the fort while I went away.

1664
01:51:07,380 --> 01:51:12,380
Chas:
Way, I was going to say this might be the conclusion for, you know,

1665
01:51:12,480 --> 01:51:17,840
Chas:
the talking directly to the audience series, but there could be one more and

1666
01:51:17,840 --> 01:51:19,500
Chas:
there could be musicals as well.

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01:51:20,080 --> 01:51:24,700
Stu:
We're just going to go back to our normal programming of talking indirectly to the audience.

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01:51:26,980 --> 01:51:29,440
Chas:
Thank you both so much.

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01:51:29,660 --> 01:51:30,540
Mel:
My pleasure.

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01:51:30,700 --> 01:51:31,120
Stu:
Bye.

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01:51:33,320 --> 01:51:36,100
FX:
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1672
01:51:36,100 --> 01:51:39,060
FX:
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01:51:39,060 --> 01:51:41,940
FX:
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01:51:41,940 --> 01:51:46,500
FX:
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01:51:46,500 --> 01:51:49,560
FX:
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1676
01:51:49,560 --> 01:51:52,520
FX:
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01:51:59,740 --> 01:52:04,200
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FX:
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